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Seregosa
SeregosaLv67yr
2018-03-02 09:45

Wow, must be the most corrupt novel out there. Not only can you not watch ads to get the next chapter, the price to unlock chapters are 8 stones AND they have like 50 chapters locked. Just look at power ranking number 1, library to heaven's path. 4 stones or watch an add, and just two chapters are "locked"/"bonus chapters". All this for a half-arsed story with too much reliance on modern knowledge and a boring mc that doesn't even have any real powers... Yeah, nah.

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roflcopter66
roflcopter66Lv4

Not only that, they also deleted the review I made last week criticizing the locked chapters. Completely corrupt.

RocketBoii
RocketBoiiLv5

Pffft, you need to pay 12 spirit stones for each chapter in Immortal Mortal.

humblepeasant
humblepeasantLv4

yeah, I agree, this is just mediocre story with mediocre translation. But hey, mediocre people love mediocre thing...

alakazamkudubu
alakazamkudubuLv4

I have been creating a few accounts just to get the free 100 spirit stones. But hey this is way better than the Library of Heaven's Path. Believe me I've read both.

Cerisine
CerisineLv5

Yikes, this did not age well.

RocketBoii
RocketBoiiLv5

No it did not.

Cerisine:Yikes, this did not age well.
RocketBoii
RocketBoiiLv5

Just to clarify, are we talking about Qidian's premium model or the review?

Cerisine:Yikes, this did not age well.
Cerisine
CerisineLv5

The review, since LoHP chapters cost more than 8 stones and have more than 50 chapters locked now. And it went premium only a week after they made the review, moreover they've since backpedalled on their stance: "I'm just generally sick of seeing people complaining about spirit stones all the time" "I'm especially annoyed with people who clearly just want to leech without paying anything for a service they're provided and want to believe it's natural." "It's not as if going premium will release any less chapters than it currently is for leechers, it only means the release rate should've increased and it's good for everyone."

RocketBoii:Just to clarify, are we talking about Qidian's premium model or the review?
RocketBoii
RocketBoiiLv5

Lmao. This site/app is getting worse and worse.

Cerisine:The review, since LoHP chapters cost more than 8 stones and have more than 50 chapters locked now. And it went premium only a week after they made the review, moreover they've since backpedalled on their stance: "I'm just generally sick of seeing people complaining about spirit stones all the time" "I'm especially annoyed with people who clearly just want to leech without paying anything for a service they're provided and want to believe it's natural." "It's not as if going premium will release any less chapters than it currently is for leechers, it only means the release rate should've increased and it's good for everyone."
Panda00028
Panda00028Lv5

Gracias por la opinion

Phantom369
Phantom369Lv4

But the story is worth it so I don't really care cause writing and translating is hard so like other profession we should pay for their efforts so don't say corrupt cause at least we earn gems for free. Think about the energy and sweat they give when writing this story amd translating it, it takes time and effort! You ungrateful pig! (sorry for my last sentence but you deserve that!)

The_Unholy_One
The_Unholy_OneLv13

Surprised to see you here seregosa im currently reading great demon king

Solrchi
SolrchiLv4

Hey what do you expect you ungrateful cheapskate swine. You expect everything to be free? Think about how the editor, author and translator have to work for day and night and long hours just to chase the deadline every week while you being a jack@*s complaining about this and that. I apologize for my language but people like you really get on my nerves and people like you are a disgrace and burden to the society and humanity. If you like to complaint so much about paying to watch each chapters then let me ask you, Would you be ok if you were to work every day & night for someone for free?

Hjkoi
HjkoiLv14

Yeah! The terribly long hours slaving away copy and pasting into a machine translator. We better be happy to throw money at them for their hard work. Can't forget about the editors with elementary school level English, either.

Solrchi:Hey what do you expect you ungrateful cheapskate swine. You expect everything to be free? Think about how the editor, author and translator have to work for day and night and long hours just to chase the deadline every week while you being a jack@*s complaining about this and that. I apologize for my language but people like you really get on my nerves and people like you are a disgrace and burden to the society and humanity. If you like to complaint so much about paying to watch each chapters then let me ask you, Would you be ok if you were to work every day & night for someone for free?
Kiba2107
Kiba2107Lv5

Xp

Sienna_Surber
Sienna_SurberLv14

Yeah I don’t like that it takes so many stones to unlock and then we read through so quick

Jameelah_Abdullahi
Jameelah_AbdullahiLv2

Making life the more expensive

wounderbook
wounderbookLv2

hmmmmmm

ArisinsKareem
ArisinsKareemLv4

Hye, I'm a fellow webnovelist who goes by the name ArisinsKareem. Can you check out my new novel "Berserker... Crank Wars!"Your feedback would be very much appreciated. Also I ask for your forgiveness if I've offended you in any way(even by adding this extra sentence for you to read)

Aaron_ThunderSteel
Aaron_ThunderSteelLv2

This is good it's just you genius who like op mcs an doesn't like a hard earned place in society

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Corty
CortyLv13

Just one word: Fascinating. I looked for something fresh as I was waiting for other novels to be updated... and oh my. After picking it up, I expected the usual tropes regarding reincarnation/spirit transfer stories but damn. I couldn't put it down for even a minute and after reading this you will feel that other novels MCs are simply lacking both in style, intelligence and character. So here is my review of it if you are intrested, and it's spoiler free. The Story - 5/5 I won't spoil anything so don't worry. The stories starts with our protagonist dying from a heart attack, from overworking, and his spirit goes to another world where he takes over a prince's body. The MC has no superpowers, no cultivating he is just a mortal thats all. But a mortal with memories from our modern world. Some reviews says his memory is overpowered but I don't think so, he utilizes all the basic knowledge that is taught in schools. Yes that may be true he remembers chemical formulas and mathematical equations but hell. If he was a diligent student -and as he is from modern china and was an engineer, that speaks from himself- so he should remember all of this. Hell even I could remember around 60-70% of the thins he brings up from school and it was fun reading about it again and I think I learned more new things from this then when I was going to school! So with the knowledge he has, he starts to develop his territory, introduce the population modern technology, industrialization, civic rights and much more, so if you would like to see how a little town with shabby, wooden cottages transforms into a city with brick buildings, this is for you. It's so satisfying to see how the world advances under his inventions. The other big plot are the witches. Yes, there is magic in the world, and as a feudal, medieval setting, they are being hunted. Badly. If they catch one, the mob may kill her on the spot or turn her over to the church which may be worse fate than death. Or MC sees magic as a new source of energy and possibilities so he wants to utilize the witches powers to help him achieve his goals and launch his people into a new, enlightened era. But to do this he needs to fight agains the church, his siblings for power and a hidden foe which when shows up our MC discovers the dark history of this new world... Characters 5/5 Just... real. There are no 2D characters here. Even the villains are interesting. Be it the church's priests, army and bishops, or Roland's (the MC) siblings. Or just the nobles in the beginning who are look down on him. Everyone has a backstory, every secondary character has a personality. The witches are all different, they are not just there to flock around the MC and be possibilities for a harem ending. No. They are people, they have distinct personalities and yes, as the story goes they may have to step back sometimes and not appear all the time in the chapters, but they never fade out as in other novels, other support characters. Every one of them has a role in the story and they are well developed (and develop throughout) and interesting. I don't want to spoil anything, so you should just start reading and meet them! P. S. : Oh yeah, also there are love in the story that develops slowly and realistically. And it's not a harem (but I would not mind it to be honest :D) Translation 4/5 The first half done on volarenovels by Roxerer was top notch, no problems with it at all. After it went to Qidian there were some problems, but they were minor things and they seem to constantly improve, mostly some editing problem as I see and its updated daily. Overall enjoyment 5/5 Best. It's just... oh gosh. It jumped to the first place in my favorite's list and this became my most anticipated novels. It's not for you if you want fights, super power ups, chapters of cultivation and heaven shattering advances. No. You will get a novel, written in western style that is more grounded in reality then most of the other Chinese novels. The MC is intelligent, knows what he can and what he can't do, what needs to be done to be successful. You will never be frustrated why the fck does the MC feels like a 5 years old with some kind of mental disorder. The witches are not omnipotent beings they are humans too that the novels also states every time and cleverly too. There are no 50. 000 years of cultivation retreat to power up to defeat a mega op giga boss just to offend somebody who stands behind that stupid guy/girl who was his/her master and told the MC every 5 second "you dare" or "you are just an ant before me" and the other, booooooring tropes. I can't praise his novel enough. Give it a shot, if you like intelligent stories and don't mind spending 3 or 5 chapters learning how to build steam engines, to speed up the mining process of ores to build canons and brick houses for the people, because it's just sooooo satisfying seeing the development of the world and the people living in it. Conclusion: 5/5 After going back to the other novels I read, catching up with the translation, I felt how much those other novels' MCs are lacking compared to Roland Wimbledon. They are just... much-much-much more... bland. Never using their brains, their logic capabilities, even if they are from 'another world' they just... never utilize anything they brought over or learned before. I started to realize how much more weak they are -in writing terms- compared to this novel and this novel's characters. I just hope the author don't mess this up and keeps it clean from all the other bullsh. t tropes all the way through. As it stands, this novel will be -at least in my opinion- one of the most well written, well thought out and most interesting novels. If you read my review until this point I thank you, and also, go and give it a shot, I hope I was able to help you pick up a good novel and you will enjoy it as much as I do.

Annndu
AnnnduLv2

Roland was sitting in an office, discussing the price of a steam engine with a businesswoman. The businesswoman said, "Your Highness, why are you fidgeting? Is the chair uncomfortable?" Roland replied, "No, I have recently been experiencing some discomfort after prolonged bouts of sitting. Perhaps, it's my hemorrhoids. It will be fine after making some adjusting. Don't mind it. Back to this batch of steam engines, the main purpose for them is…" "But, Your Highness. I smell the scent of photinias. Who was the one that brought such a vulgar flower here? Why are your maids so…" The businesswoman's sentence was cut short by Roland's unnatural facial expression. "Enough Margaret!" Roland appeared to be holding back something, perhaps the pain caused by his hemorrhoids. His body began to convulse abnormally as he stuttered, "I… Urgh! I… Ah! Am only… Huff puff… only a little…" The businesswoman carefully listened to Roland Wimbledon's explanation. With his esteemed status, His Highness still insists on negotiating with me, a businesswoman, despite being ill. What a responsible hegemon. There were slapping and smacking sounds…as well as a moan. Unsure if it was a mistake on her part, Margaret felt that she had heard the crisp slapping sound of flesh meeting flesh. However, it was so soft that she shrugged it off, thinking that she was hearing things. "Your Highness, your health is of greater importance. Why don't I come again another day?" "No… Well… I'm just… feeling a little… comfortable now…" Roland's body trembled a few times as though he was releasing something he had been holding back for a long while. He reached out his hand and touched the air. After resting his eyes for two minutes, he opened them again as he said with vigor, "I apologize, Margaret. I felt a little uncomfortable a moment ago but I'm fine now. Let us continue." "Alright, Your Highness," said Margaret with a smile, her nose twitching unnaturally. The smell of photinias turned stronger. What irresponsible maids. Margaret lamented unhappily in her mind. P.S. The smell of photinias resembles that of semen. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- found some interesting RTW fanfictions that were talked about in China. As a big fan of RTW, I thought someone else might like it. If you like them, pls tell me. i'll translate more. :D https://forum.webnovel.com/d/5323-fanfictions-for-rtw/2

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