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2017-11-11 05:45

While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something. While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life. It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them. Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything

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