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Ashandar
AshandarLv157yr
2017-09-04 03:32

I have read over 50+ chapters and I can say I am highly disappointed with the main character I understand coming from a abandoned planet not knowing social norms or morals or anything like that but he has had other human count encounters such as in the virtual world and with his adopted father so why after so long does he still treat everybody as a threat before he even assesses the situation his first reaction is to attack first so as to our main characters intelligence there's not much I can say highly about it yeah he has a decent amount of book-smart but for all intents and purposes he's an animal I say that because he reacts the same way a feral animal would he doesn't judge the situation he attacks first doesn't care what he kills who or he kills even if the person's helping him so after saying all that I have to say review for this novel is extremely low because he's not a character that I can bring myself to care about in fact while reading it I'm hoping that there's somebody that comes around that'll beat the living hell out of him instead of hopeing for him to win fights I'm cheering on his enemies just because of the fact that he treats everybody as an enemy even the people that he shouldn't be I wouldn't have so much of a problem if he actually showed any kind of initiative to learn about people or Society and actually tried to learn how to interact with people but he's been around people for months now with no change at all not even at the smallest level

Legend of the Supreme Soldier

Fang Xiang
4.3
607 Chs

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dudex_kratos
dudex_kratosLv4

Well, u should learn to use fullstop.

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pembaca
pembacaLv5

Omg

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DrewTaylorGang
DrewTaylorGangLv11

OMG, savage

dudex_kratos:Well, u should learn to use fullstop.
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Chris
ChrisLv12

Lmao

7yr
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Chris
ChrisLv12

My lungs stopped working

7yr
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dracon
draconLv10

Nah im totally opposite you man.. i dont like characters who give their compassion and care with someone he or she doesnt know better be a gore instead befriending with unknown people that will in the end kill you

7yr
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Ashandar
AshandarLv15

Never said you needed to treat everyone with compassion and care or anything all I was saying was that he needs to learn how to judge the situation instead of reacting to all situations the exact same way because the way he reacts to all situations at least up chapter 50 by attacking before determining whether they're even an enemy or not which shows a lack of intelligence or that he is a complete psycho

dracon:Nah im totally opposite you man.. i dont like characters who give their compassion and care with someone he or she doesnt know better be a gore instead befriending with unknown people that will in the end kill you
7yr
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Naas
NaasLv4

So a kid from the slums that’s had the ****tiest life, doesn’t trust anyone? Huh, whoda thunk it🧐

7yr
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Ashandar
AshandarLv15

You're going to make a comment you should make sure you actually read what somebody says I completely understand not trusting anybody but there's a big difference between not trusting everybody and treating everybody like they're already in enemy instead of at least being neutral to them because not trusting somebody is completely understandable when you grow up like he did but attacking everybody at first sight is not understandable that's just

Naas:So a kid from the slums that’s had the ****tiest life, doesn’t trust anyone? Huh, whoda thunk it🧐
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Naas
NaasLv4

There are literally at this moment kids in slums that will kill you for nothing more than a wrong glance in real life. Is it ****ed up? Yeah, very much so, but maybe that’s what the author is trying to convey.

Ashandar:You're going to make a comment you should make sure you actually read what somebody says I completely understand not trusting anybody but there's a big difference between not trusting everybody and treating everybody like they're already in enemy instead of at least being neutral to them because not trusting somebody is completely understandable when you grow up like he did but attacking everybody at first sight is not understandable that's just
7yr
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Ashandar
AshandarLv15

Yes well that is true but if that is the type of story this is going to be about why would I want to read about it in a syfy/fantasy story if I wanted to read about real life I wouldn't be reading stories here so I stand by my original review if this story

Naas:There are literally at this moment kids in slums that will kill you for nothing more than a wrong glance in real life. Is it ****ed up? Yeah, very much so, but maybe that’s what the author is trying to convey.
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DrewTaylorGang
DrewTaylorGangLv11

Thanks

7yr
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DaoistFatGrandma
DaoistFatGrandmaLv5

Im.. *huff huff*... out of ..*huff*.. breath...

7yr
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LordGrims
LordGrimsLv15

You just write it out what i felt after reading the novel till now. I'm around 50/50 to dropping it. Wkwkwk.

7yr
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Tim_Allen
Tim_AllenLv4

And in these types of books the people who attack you for looking at them wrong are usually the shallow antagonists whose story arc lasts one chapter because being a cunt and attacking people for no reason all the time doesnt make for a good story

Naas:There are literally at this moment kids in slums that will kill you for nothing more than a wrong glance in real life. Is it ****ed up? Yeah, very much so, but maybe that’s what the author is trying to convey.
6yr
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Naas
NaasLv4

Actually I take back everything I said. I had only read a small portion, but later on this story indeed became dogsh*t. Apologies friend.

Tim_Allen:And in these types of books the people who attack you for looking at them wrong are usually the shallow antagonists whose story arc lasts one chapter because being a cunt and attacking people for no reason all the time doesnt make for a good story
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Nox_Invictus_
Nox_Invictus_Lv6

Where is the period, it's hiding I swear

6yr
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Kritiko
KritikoLv10

Oh... The comment section is really helpful, so, I won't be reading this one.

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BrknDevil
BrknDevilLv5

Periods in Sentences. You have the ability to use them

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Ashandar
AshandarLv15

Yes I do I just choose not to after all I am not writing a report to be graded I am writing a review that anyone can choose to read or choose not to read if a lot of people read or nobody reads doesn't matter to me I only wrote it to help anyone who does choose to read my review decide if this story is for them so grammar and Punctuation don't matter to me in the slightest

BrknDevil:Periods in Sentences. You have the ability to use them
6yr
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