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2018-10-21 16:21

Story is inconsistent. Ending is badly rushed. MC is rapist. Too many loopholes. My main problem is ending is so bad author rushed everything. Without explaining what happened. Not to mention main villain of this story is defeated by MC of another novel. Last chapter is just HUGE advertisement for this authors other story. Characters are likeable. It's fun read if you don't mind mc raping multiple girls. Story is good until author decides to rush everything.

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