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LLawliet
LLawlietLv56yr
2018-09-09 14:01

To start, I've seen so many people complaining about the slow pacing of the novel. Please understand that it is a SCHOOL SETTING, you should be expecting relatively slow pacing. How many novels with school settings have fast pacing? Generally not very many. When you see that it's a school setting, this pacing is what you are signing up for. On another note, the novel has decent to good character development and world building due to the "filler" chapters (if you think that these chapters are filler then I'm sorry that your IQ is in the double digits). Whilst it isn't the best novel, its refreshing to see a novel that places emphasis on characters and its world rather than meaningless action. If anything, the action based chapters are the worst part of the novel as they do nothing to advance the story or develop the characters/world and are clearly the most filler-like parts of the novel.

Battle Frenzy

Skull Elf
4.5
1212 Chs

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StylishD
StylishDLv13

You sir deserve an award. I always like to have novels like this to read on the side. Ones that focus more on world building are like a refreshing cup of tea.

6yr
myNm111
myNm111Lv3

bro , go read isaac then you know what a good novel is , in only 28 chapters . here tournament is going on for eternity

5yr
2
hydraxl3
hydraxl3Lv11

I agree with you on most of that, but what do you have against people with double digit IQ? That is literally half the population. IQ is set up so they measure where everyone is, label the average as 100, and then compare everyone against that. IQ below 80 would make sense as an insult, but below 100 is just a normal human being.

4yr
1
Ryan_Bruno
Ryan_BrunoLv2

haven't read it but I'm going to now

myNm111:bro , go read isaac then you know what a good novel is , in only 28 chapters . here tournament is going on for eternity
4yr
timmyy_elm
timmyy_elmLv1

I'd throw hands at you for saying the action scenes are filler wang zhong vs Mo Wen will always be a goated fight and the tournament arc had probably the best fights I've seen from any novels I've ever read they build up the side characters development and are just cool.

2yr
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chidinma
chidinmaLv4

It's finally here! It's finally here! Thank you Quidian! Thank you so much !😭 Now I can enjoy this novel 😎😤. I'm looking forward to more realeases

6yr

The10thCrow
The10thCrowLv14

When I read about them using a black hole as a power source. I was like what the **** why? You have the technology to make a fucking black hole you use it as an energy source. And dont let me get started with it connecting earth and moon together I mean why won't it just swallow everything in the solar system? I have no problem with sci-fi novels I read swallowed star and super gene my problem is when they try to be "scientific". When people read this they might think ow a black hole can be used as a power source hmmm. Why not a giant antimatter factory its still possible. But this just makes drop it instantly swallowed star has extraterrestrial super beings. Super gene goes for the multiverse they both tackle the things that we know little about. but we no a lot about black holes and what it does and it is definitely not source of energy its more like it pulls things in orbit. Maybe if they use a white hole it would have been more belevable. Ps. for those who will say that we dont know anything about what happens inside a black maybe thats where the energy is. BOI IF YOU HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY TO POKE AROUND EVEN AT THE SURFACE OF A BLACK HOLE THAT CAN LITERALLY PULL THE FUCKING ATOMS IN A MATERIAL WHY WHOULD YOU FUCKing NEED TO BE AFRAID. The MATERIAL THEY USED MUST BE AT THE LEAST BE INVINCIBLE TO ANY PHYSICAL DAMAGE. AND WHATS THE POINT OF THE STORY THEN?

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JavaSprings
JavaSpringsLv3

Giving it the average grade as it is the kind of story that is mostly accepted within the standards of Webnovel's community. Hmmm... How should I give a comparison to this without spoiling... A Shadow Hacks-esque novel with some JP tropes that are badly done? Yeah, sound about right.

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grxx1
grxx1Lv4

One of my favorite stories, but updates rather infrequent. Absolutely love everything about the novel though. The Mc is intelligent yet low-key. He isn't a psychopath who kills everyone who he sees. Even though he appears to be weak in talent, he is fairly respected and liked for his hard work, intelligence, and inner strength by those who know him. There are females who like the Mc, but it isn't blown to proportion where he just marries everyone. Seems more realistic on that front.

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eat_ice_cream
eat_ice_creamLv5

I just notice.... It's finally here!!!!!!!! Thank you for the ice cream. Now it's complete. All the stories from "skeleton" are here. For All reader's who like "Tempest Of The Stellar War", try this one, it's have similar story and style.

6yr
Asprox
AsproxLv5

Warning! Translator is known to scam readers of their SS with repeat chapters! Repeat/ skipped chapters have been known to happen for some time now, with many reports being filed through qidian, but no corrections/explanations have been made, either by the translator or even qidian itself. The lack of response/compensation or the ****** acknowledgement of said mistakes makes me question the very existence of qidian’s customer support/ quality control department... Is the “report an issue” link on the app broken? Or was it made just for show? Please fix the issue with the repeat and skipped chapters as soon as possible. No matter how good the story may be, when this type of thing happens repeatedly, it destroys the whole reading experience and impacts our impression of the story itself.

5yr
Overlord_Venus
Overlord_VenusLv14

This is a story leaning a bit on the macho side, battle battle battle everywhere, character development is slow, there is no romance ( none whatsoever), most of the battle techniques of the mc are introduced abruptly ( like there is no training or comprehension session, when he's fighting, at the very least second he erupts with a new technique to blow other people's mind),a few stuffs are exaggerated ( damn, I'm giving way too many negative opinions), take the story with a pinch of salt and hopefully you can enjoy it

6yr
itsellanutella
itsellanutellaLv13

This author infodumps for like 60% of the story, and when he’s not he’s wasting chapters on something frivolous. Secondly, the premise was very enjoyable but the execution is way off. There’s zero buildup. Finally, the author had the nerve to refer to black people as literal slaves (that is the exact word the translator used) who fawned over those with yellow skin, and the paler you were the higher your status. That turned me off completely. I liked it enough to read up to that point despite the many flaws of this author, but the blatant racism is a no go.

6yr
HeartFlame
HeartFlameLv6

If you have read any other of the author's novel then you have read this already Hiding strength and low key MC who has a famous identity on VR world does a lot of things that make beauties come at him It would be okay if it was at least posted fast you can just skip the annoying parts and get to the cool ones(trust me you don't miss anything doing this) but this novel is already out for a while and has a turtle-paced release, so yeah, if you have the patience of a saint go ahead.

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