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PigNebula
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2021-03-12 11:18

What the actual frick was the ending? THE most rushed ending I have ever read. it's basically about 4/5's of the way through the story arc and it just wraps its self up in about 5 chapters. It's like the author had 15 minutes to live and wanted his book done before he died. Other than the story being garbage the characters are painfully mediocre and become cardboard cutouts about halfway through. The world building is a huge missed opportunity as to begin with it has a great premise but utterly fails to be unique or interesting and falls into the trap of generic "lower level world -> higher level world -> even higher level world". The translation quality is pretty great for this website, which while not saying very much, is nice. With the book being complete the stability of updates is automatically perfect. Translation quality: 8/10 Stability of Updates: 10/10 Story Development: 1/10 Character Design: 2/10 World Background: 3/10 Overall: 4.8/10 (Dragged up heavily by Stability of Updates and Translation Quality) I wouldn't recommend. What a shame.

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bro I think all the Chinese stories are like that.

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