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Jello
JelloLv18yr
2017-04-10 03:12

Hi Guys, This is Jello (the editor of the novel) so I'll try and keep my review honest and somewhat objective. If you're looking for a survival/sci-fi story, look no further! This novel is unique. I can honestly say that the characters, world, and plot are like no other. Although I have not read much farther than you guys (I don't read/speak Chinese), I would definitely suggest for anyone to read the novel. All cliches are broken, and there really is no trope that this novel uses. Each chapter is filled with emotional character development, gruesome scenes of survival, and, although fictional, realistic plot buildup. Concerning update rate, as I'm still a full-time student, the chapter per week should stay around the same for this year. However, coming September or October next year, I hope my rate of editing will increase so that we can dish out more chapters! Be ready to encounter death, friendships, betrayals, and so much more! Hope you guys give us a review and a shot!

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DarkShadowScorch_
DarkShadowScorch_Lv6

It caught my eye that you mentioned that you don’t read/write Chinese and I was curious about how exactly you manage to translate the novel or are you just the editor in the sense you barely look at read? I’m not trying to say anything bad about it, I was just wondering if you had any special resources that you use that you can suggest.

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koala28
koala28Lv11

He edits.

DarkShadowScorch_:It caught my eye that you mentioned that you don’t read/write Chinese and I was curious about how exactly you manage to translate the novel or are you just the editor in the sense you barely look at read? I’m not trying to say anything bad about it, I was just wondering if you had any special resources that you use that you can suggest.
Daoist_Bored_Guy
Daoist_Bored_GuyLv12

Sounds like an interesting story, I‘ll give it a read after catching up to the current chapter of Gu Daoist

Meihua_37
Meihua_37Lv6

OMG a translator from blobtranslations? Hello, oh great god

DarkShadowScorch_:It caught my eye that you mentioned that you don’t read/write Chinese and I was curious about how exactly you manage to translate the novel or are you just the editor in the sense you barely look at read? I’m not trying to say anything bad about it, I was just wondering if you had any special resources that you use that you can suggest.
DarkShadowScorch_
DarkShadowScorch_Lv6

Lol hi

Meihua_37:OMG a translator from blobtranslations? Hello, oh great god
SaidenOTerbra
SaidenOTerbraLv5

I will give it a try!

Dahlia_maatalah
Dahlia_maatalahLv4

So scared of that 0/week thing ... I think i'll just wait 1 other year to read this novel just to avoid getting tortured.

Bartzabel
BartzabelLv11

Hey... could you like... update your novel? It's been about 7 months...

Superheated
SuperheatedLv5

Lmao did he captured by the Qidian Mafia ????

rosemary123456
rosemary123456Lv4

Yup you may be right

koala28:He edits.
Friends101
Friends101Lv15

He can't, with no Main Characters to go off of. There's no story to go on. At most there would be an after story of how the world looks like.

Bartzabel:Hey... could you like... update your novel? It's been about 7 months...
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ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15

This is a pretty standard survival vs surprise evolution story. Unfortunately, it's slow and dry. In the beginning, there is at least one or more plot holes per chapter. The MC is so dumb, I nearly dropped the series several times in the beginning, but he suddenly becomes intelligent around chapter 25... That said, he really needs to quit trying to ingest formalin. Note: The intelligence is short-lived. Although the MC appears like he's supposed to be a character with morality, he only acts that way on screen. Off screen, he appears to be very inconsiderate to his supposed comrades and friends and doesn't give them the vital information they may need to survive. For example, he does not warn his friends about where he encounters deadly things, so they are completely unaware of it when they walk into the same traps he did. I'm not sure if he's a fake good guy, if he is just oblivious and forgot about this life-saving details, or if this is just an example of poor writing. Furthermore, the MC starts smoking tobacco as soon as the apocalypse starts. Since the apocalypse isn't horrible enough, apparently he wants to give himself nicotine cravings on top of it? There is no logic here. There isn't much character depth, and the strength of their bonds does not come across well. The other characters are relatively flat, although they have consistent characterization. However, "smart" characters are not smart--they may be even less intelligent than the protagonist. If one of them is smart enough to design a certain plan or trap, why should he or she assume another person can’t? Their combat strategies are weak and full of pomp, and they don't plan things out well at all. They are only considered "smart" because they can modify organisms, and the writer did not demonstrate any good examples of their intelligence in action. They have observation skills, but their strategy and planning is so weak, this evens out their IQ to something around average. None of the characters are particularly likable or unlikable. They're all forgettable. There are numerous inconsistencies, especially about who knows what, where one character is, and what characters are up to. In the beginning, there is even a gun that is never mentioned again and disappears from the plot without any explanation. Characters also disappear and reappear several chapters later like they'd been there the whole time. The writing is lacking, and the pacing is off. The action scenes are too abrupt and don’t let don't let the readers feel much excitement. Overall, the intensity, suspense, and action could be much better. The strongest part of this series is the setting. Just make sure to turn off any knowledge of science before diving in. Although the translations are good, there are distracting grammar errors often enough to lower my evaluation on that point. There is also inconsistency between whether pounds or kilograms are used, and it'd be nice if the translation and editing team just picked one. The Chinese names got flipped, which feels awkward to me since I automatically assumed the characters were named with their family names followed by their given names like everything else on this site and other Chinese web novel translation sites. I kept wondering why they normally addressed one character by his surname or as mister with his given name rather than his surname.... It looks like the author had a lot of ambition with this series but not enough scientific knowledge to make it believable (It's okay if no one understands how it works or if it's fantasy--just don't make fake science!). This is a huge turn-off. It also looks like the author planned to make this a heart-rendering, action/drama series, but he or she was unsuccessful on all fronts. If you want an mild survival series to waste some time on, this is an option. I just don't recommend it for anyone looking for something to get his or her heart pumping.

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