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EdwinTr
EdwinTrLv117yr
2018-03-27 16:05

Not gonna lie... But ... This is one of the ****tiest stories I had ever read in this app. Is just... Fck is annoying AF the MC is fcking annoying the side b!tches I mean side characters are useless AF and their personality is sh!t the whole background story is fcking trash story doesn't fcking move goddamn like seriously guys you can start reading this and after 3 chapters y'all will find this story annoying then when you're reading more and more y'all will be thinking ohh my be the story will improve but noo is still a ****tier story fck I can't read this sh!t thx for the hard work to the translators but fck no the story y'all pick to translate was this ****tier story thats too bad... If only y'all had picked other story instead of this sh!t that will be good... But still thx to the translator and go fck you're self author :) .I. 🖕🖕🖕🖕

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Deextertm
DeextertmLv6

What do you read if not this ****?

geot5
geot5Lv5

xp

xcares
xcaresLv6

This! LoL and all the comments are from people that are as annoyed as you are but they keep reading this shi*.Go figure

StressedByHW
StressedByHWLv4

Not all of them keep reading example is me I stoped just now on chapter 27

xcares:This! LoL and all the comments are from people that are as annoyed as you are but they keep reading this shi*.Go figure
xcares
xcaresLv6

Good on you ;)

StressedByHW:Not all of them keep reading example is me I stoped just now on chapter 27
Rantrenz_Teo
Rantrenz_TeoLv1

I thought that too at first but later on it got better. For me at least and now I rate it 5 stars

Oohhlala
OohhlalaLv4

I left at some 50+ chapters.

zhydrich
zhydrichLv3

Hahaha

zhydrich
zhydrichLv3

Hahaha

TihomDash
TihomDashLv4

I stopper at chapter 3 only... Bye

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5

Chapter 17 here. This LN so far is dry and boring.

Getsmeoff
GetsmeoffLv2

I agree. I read upto chap 700 something, i keep reading hoping to get this ****y story better but i can't torture myself so i drop it. This has to the the ******** webnovel I've ever read.

Kobby_Xtreme
Kobby_XtremeLv3

Is it that bad??

Pripriri
PripririLv5

Your mother is the most ****tiest person in the world

Pripriri
PripririLv5

Your mother is the most ****tiest person in the world

Pripriri
PripririLv5

Your mother is the most ****tiest person in the world

waiwai33
waiwai33Lv1

are you a child? grow up

Pripriri:Your mother is the most ****tiest person in the world
Pripriri
PripririLv5

Old man. In not rushing on growing up. It's sad to be old

waiwai33:are you a child? grow up
Lucine_Li
Lucine_LiLv2

This is true, the MC just does stuff just because the girls looks like his master. The girls are also dumb and annoying as well. I feel like the story could be so much more if it weren’t for the dumb knowledge some of these characters have.

Otakotchi
OtakotchiLv4

xp

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averagereaderman
averagereadermanLv5
Hevveh
HevvehLv1

Sorry if my reviews are too long but, this a modern day cultivation story, which is pretty uncommon. Now, it's very slow paced but some of you may like it that way since it's slightly reasonable, knowing that there are questions that haven't been solved yet throughout the story. I had few problems reading this at all and it's pretty good, as Qidian chose well. Here's why: Translation Quality: The quality of Qidian's translations are truly one of the best, the editors and translators included. This is always expected from me, and probably most of the readers on Qidian. I literally found no errors in grammar/punctuation and it was all easily read and understood. Updating Stability: The update stability (like always) was always followed by and true from what I've seen. The translators and editors have a schedule and they obey it (5 chapters a week). The translation speed though, could be a little faster, maybe 7 days/week. I say that since the novel is already completed and still has about 2000 chapters to go. Other than that no problems with this. Story Development: The story and plot develops at a VERY slow pace. But if you ignore that, you find almost no problems. If you do read past the beginning, (unlike some other people) you find that it slowly get's better. There is a clear objective and the plot is reasonable and there isn't any plot holes. As the information is also given to you at reasonable times, as it is, the plot is pretty good. Character Design: The main character and some very important characters have personalities and each have goals and backstories. But the side characters aren't really realistic, and girls may fall in love too easily (to the extent of 10 days together = love forever). He easily discards girls even if that happens (for the sake of cultivation) and makes it look like they're side characters, although they aren't, and indeed do help with the development of story and the main character. Which is why this is okay. World Background: The world develops slowly and information is given to you slowly (like I said before). No info dumps and the world development isn't only at the beginning, (like some stories) and it develops throughout the story instead of all the info at the beginning. This makes it comprehensive and allows you to take it all in, and know what's happening. Taking all of that into account, I rate and recommend this story at 4.4 stars! I liked this story and hopefully you do too, just get through the beginning and it'll get better (in my opinion)! Go ahead and read now.

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