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Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv67yr
2017-06-17 19:49

i wish Qidian to focus on this Novel and update faster, this will boost more viewers because this story is very good and there is no flaw in the story where the writer make a lot of mistake with common sense and illogical story lines, i read only highly approved writers and this is a very good writer an the story is very refreshing, this novel got very high potential, please Qidian, update this novel faster.

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Atuanu
AtuanuLv11

I fully agree with Carter : please Qidian, update this novel faster.

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HeavenSeizer
HeavenSeizerLv12

Faster update please!!!!

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EXPLOSIONGOD
EXPLOSIONGODLv5

A lot of this "common sense" is just bad or good translator trying to make him go faster may ruin the quality let him go at his own pace!

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Lysistrata
LysistrataLv5

You guys do realize that the actual translators for most novels here have not much to do with qidian right? I don't know about this one but for example all the wuxia world novels are blatandly copied here without any permission what so ever, so...

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ChaosKing
ChaosKingLv5

me to i agree update this novel faster

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Phanatos
PhanatosLv5

yes i want this to update faster too tough

Uptime
UptimeLv4

"I only read highly approved writers"..... You have no idea how much you're missing

Yukito
YukitoLv6

my reason to drop this novel is "too many flaws" 😂

maxanonymity
maxanonymityLv6

The story is pretty good and fast paced, but there are quite a few inconsistencies. Still, it's gripping enough for the flaws to be glossed over.

Supreme_Sovereign
Supreme_SovereignLv5

oh

Pudina
PudinaLv5

Will read it

Kiba2107
Kiba2107Lv5

Exp

Kiba2107
Kiba2107Lv5

Exp

Alhassan
AlhassanLv4

Exp

Ekkoo
EkkooLv4

Lev 4

SkyDog
SkyDogLv3

Agreed

dkr
dkrLv5

And I fully agree with atuanu

Atuanu:I fully agree with Carter : please Qidian, update this novel faster.
Redanxelar
RedanxelarLv5

I seriously disagree with carter about no flaw in the novel and no mistake in common sense. You would only say that at the beginning of the novel, The author is a racist he described other countries as worthless piece of sh*t, USA as a very corrupt place, Japanese as people who lack common sense, Africans as slave drivers and warmongers and China as the only respectable place in the world. What the heck is that if everywhere is that bad do you think earth would be as it is yet you are saying this novel as no flaw in commonsense say that only after reading a good portion of the novel. Mc thinks like someone in the medieval era, although I know due to him being someone from a different world with no relevant laws, yet he is currently on earth and spent years he should have known how it is yet he disregard that made people slaves and killed others, and author wrote that USA just allowed him to do such so that after building up the city they could take it and rip without sowing. If that was how USA acts do you think that will have popula support

Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6

lol China is the only respectable country in the world? you are just a frog in the bottom of a well, China has a massacre thousands of people just for protesting, killing millions of innocent political prisoners and minorities and farming their organs for profit, slave labours in the factories and exploiting their workers, 107 billionaires are Chinese officials so you can set the highest record bar for corruption, no free speech, persecution at any time in a kangaroo court and no trial as long as it fits their narrative, you should also spend more time reading real stories instead of fantasies, about all the brutalities killings and corruption and struggle for power, that's exactly is happening in China, you can hear many Chinese officials being killed because of corruption, that's just a farce, all of them were the opposition party, It's like a game of thrones in real life, you won't get much of the bad news because everything is censored in China.

Redanxelar:I seriously disagree with carter about no flaw in the novel and no mistake in common sense. You would only say that at the beginning of the novel, The author is a racist he described other countries as worthless piece of sh*t, USA as a very corrupt place, Japanese as people who lack common sense, Africans as slave drivers and warmongers and China as the only respectable place in the world. What the heck is that if everywhere is that bad do you think earth would be as it is yet you are saying this novel as no flaw in commonsense say that only after reading a good portion of the novel. Mc thinks like someone in the medieval era, although I know due to him being someone from a different world with no relevant laws, yet he is currently on earth and spent years he should have known how it is yet he disregard that made people slaves and killed others, and author wrote that USA just allowed him to do such so that after building up the city they could take it and rip without sowing. If that was how USA acts do you think that will have popula support
Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6

and the whole world wants to migrat to the US is the proof that the US is one of the best and greatest country in the world, individual ******* and equal oppotunity.

Redanxelar:I seriously disagree with carter about no flaw in the novel and no mistake in common sense. You would only say that at the beginning of the novel, The author is a racist he described other countries as worthless piece of sh*t, USA as a very corrupt place, Japanese as people who lack common sense, Africans as slave drivers and warmongers and China as the only respectable place in the world. What the heck is that if everywhere is that bad do you think earth would be as it is yet you are saying this novel as no flaw in commonsense say that only after reading a good portion of the novel. Mc thinks like someone in the medieval era, although I know due to him being someone from a different world with no relevant laws, yet he is currently on earth and spent years he should have known how it is yet he disregard that made people slaves and killed others, and author wrote that USA just allowed him to do such so that after building up the city they could take it and rip without sowing. If that was how USA acts do you think that will have popula support
Other Reviews
averagereaderman
averagereadermanLv5
Hevveh
HevvehLv1

Sorry if my reviews are too long but, this a modern day cultivation story, which is pretty uncommon. Now, it's very slow paced but some of you may like it that way since it's slightly reasonable, knowing that there are questions that haven't been solved yet throughout the story. I had few problems reading this at all and it's pretty good, as Qidian chose well. Here's why: Translation Quality: The quality of Qidian's translations are truly one of the best, the editors and translators included. This is always expected from me, and probably most of the readers on Qidian. I literally found no errors in grammar/punctuation and it was all easily read and understood. Updating Stability: The update stability (like always) was always followed by and true from what I've seen. The translators and editors have a schedule and they obey it (5 chapters a week). The translation speed though, could be a little faster, maybe 7 days/week. I say that since the novel is already completed and still has about 2000 chapters to go. Other than that no problems with this. Story Development: The story and plot develops at a VERY slow pace. But if you ignore that, you find almost no problems. If you do read past the beginning, (unlike some other people) you find that it slowly get's better. There is a clear objective and the plot is reasonable and there isn't any plot holes. As the information is also given to you at reasonable times, as it is, the plot is pretty good. Character Design: The main character and some very important characters have personalities and each have goals and backstories. But the side characters aren't really realistic, and girls may fall in love too easily (to the extent of 10 days together = love forever). He easily discards girls even if that happens (for the sake of cultivation) and makes it look like they're side characters, although they aren't, and indeed do help with the development of story and the main character. Which is why this is okay. World Background: The world develops slowly and information is given to you slowly (like I said before). No info dumps and the world development isn't only at the beginning, (like some stories) and it develops throughout the story instead of all the info at the beginning. This makes it comprehensive and allows you to take it all in, and know what's happening. Taking all of that into account, I rate and recommend this story at 4.4 stars! I liked this story and hopefully you do too, just get through the beginning and it'll get better (in my opinion)! Go ahead and read now.

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