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Cohran
CohranLv57yr
2017-04-13 23:57

I really liked this story at the beginning but now I am not so sure. The concept is good as it diverges from the typical xianxia plotline/tropes. The only problem is the harem as I think that the story would be far better without it. I am looking forward to how it develops further down.

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vineet0786
vineet0786Lv6

👍

Wolfick
WolfickLv13

I am usually a fan of a good crystal palace, but I couldn't agree more in the case of this novel. It would indeed be better without it.

Roastir
RoastirLv4

HAHAHA.. THE RAWS OF THIS NOVEL IS ALREADY COMPLETED BROTHER. SO WE COULD ONLY READ IT OR NOT. BUT I THINK, MOST OF THE READERS WOULD DISAGREE TO YOU. THE HAREM IS ALREADY INTRODUCED IN THIS NOVEL, WE COULD EXPECT MORE WOMEN INTO THE HAREM IN THE FUTURE AND THAT'S FOR SURE. YOU BETTER NOT READ IT, YOU'LL BE DISAPPOINTED IN THE END. IT IS NOT SUITED TO YOUR PREFERENCES. FIND ANOTHER, THERE'S SO MANY THAT IS PURELY ACTION, DRAMA, COMEDY, WITH A LITTLE ROMANCE OUT THERE. OH AND BY THE WAY, IT IS ONE OF MY FAV. HAHAHA.

Cohran
CohranLv5

Plz turn off you caps lock. I dropped it a long time ago...

Roastir:HAHAHA.. THE RAWS OF THIS NOVEL IS ALREADY COMPLETED BROTHER. SO WE COULD ONLY READ IT OR NOT. BUT I THINK, MOST OF THE READERS WOULD DISAGREE TO YOU. THE HAREM IS ALREADY INTRODUCED IN THIS NOVEL, WE COULD EXPECT MORE WOMEN INTO THE HAREM IN THE FUTURE AND THAT'S FOR SURE. YOU BETTER NOT READ IT, YOU'LL BE DISAPPOINTED IN THE END. IT IS NOT SUITED TO YOUR PREFERENCES. FIND ANOTHER, THERE'S SO MANY THAT IS PURELY ACTION, DRAMA, COMEDY, WITH A LITTLE ROMANCE OUT THERE. OH AND BY THE WAY, IT IS ONE OF MY FAV. HAHAHA.
Cohran
CohranLv5

... So chunni

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killer_smiley
killer_smileyLv10

whats up man, i am looking for some purely action novels, can you recommend some? thanks

Roastir:HAHAHA.. THE RAWS OF THIS NOVEL IS ALREADY COMPLETED BROTHER. SO WE COULD ONLY READ IT OR NOT. BUT I THINK, MOST OF THE READERS WOULD DISAGREE TO YOU. THE HAREM IS ALREADY INTRODUCED IN THIS NOVEL, WE COULD EXPECT MORE WOMEN INTO THE HAREM IN THE FUTURE AND THAT'S FOR SURE. YOU BETTER NOT READ IT, YOU'LL BE DISAPPOINTED IN THE END. IT IS NOT SUITED TO YOUR PREFERENCES. FIND ANOTHER, THERE'S SO MANY THAT IS PURELY ACTION, DRAMA, COMEDY, WITH A LITTLE ROMANCE OUT THERE. OH AND BY THE WAY, IT IS ONE OF MY FAV. HAHAHA.
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

Is there anything better without harem

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

Is there anything better without harem

Solonius
SoloniusLv3

You're right. The harem is nothing but annoying.

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Hevveh
HevvehLv1

Sorry if my reviews are too long but, this a modern day cultivation story, which is pretty uncommon. Now, it's very slow paced but some of you may like it that way since it's slightly reasonable, knowing that there are questions that haven't been solved yet throughout the story. I had few problems reading this at all and it's pretty good, as Qidian chose well. Here's why: Translation Quality: The quality of Qidian's translations are truly one of the best, the editors and translators included. This is always expected from me, and probably most of the readers on Qidian. I literally found no errors in grammar/punctuation and it was all easily read and understood. Updating Stability: The update stability (like always) was always followed by and true from what I've seen. The translators and editors have a schedule and they obey it (5 chapters a week). The translation speed though, could be a little faster, maybe 7 days/week. I say that since the novel is already completed and still has about 2000 chapters to go. Other than that no problems with this. Story Development: The story and plot develops at a VERY slow pace. But if you ignore that, you find almost no problems. If you do read past the beginning, (unlike some other people) you find that it slowly get's better. There is a clear objective and the plot is reasonable and there isn't any plot holes. As the information is also given to you at reasonable times, as it is, the plot is pretty good. Character Design: The main character and some very important characters have personalities and each have goals and backstories. But the side characters aren't really realistic, and girls may fall in love too easily (to the extent of 10 days together = love forever). He easily discards girls even if that happens (for the sake of cultivation) and makes it look like they're side characters, although they aren't, and indeed do help with the development of story and the main character. Which is why this is okay. World Background: The world develops slowly and information is given to you slowly (like I said before). No info dumps and the world development isn't only at the beginning, (like some stories) and it develops throughout the story instead of all the info at the beginning. This makes it comprehensive and allows you to take it all in, and know what's happening. Taking all of that into account, I rate and recommend this story at 4.4 stars! I liked this story and hopefully you do too, just get through the beginning and it'll get better (in my opinion)! Go ahead and read now.

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