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vire
vireLv36yrvire

Very bad, I have no idea how people are rating this 4-5 stars. - MC is a soulless sociopath, as is his father. - Side characters are not bad, unfortunately MC gets a lot of them killed for no reason and feels no guilt for it. - Very similar to WMW, in all the wrong ways. WMW might as well be borderline plagiarism of this story, except in WMW *everyone* is a sociopath, whereas here it's just the MC & dad (as of ch 20). - MC's power progression involves him watching people swing their swords, copying it with the AI chip, then eating some fruits and crap that boosts his strength but magically doesn't do anything for anyone else. A few weeks later he is the strongest person in the castle. - Basic inconsistencies all over the place. MC's dad travels 10 days to a mine, MC catches up within hours on foot. MC also magically scans his father from 13 kilometers away using AI chip, despite it repeatedly being established that the AI chip uses MC's senses to detect things. MC goes to woods to catch a bear that his father publicly killed the previous chapter. Author has absolutely no respect for consistency or fact checking. - Pseudo-waifu's all over the place approaching MC for ***. No downside to it, except MC claims he "can't have *** or it will interfere with the development of his body." - As extension of above point, MC is supposed to be from the future but is evidently completely ignorant of technology and biology. He also never once thinks about or mentions his entire past/future life, even though it's ostensibly the most interesting thing about him. It's hard to tell if the characters are just that shallow, or if MC is actually mentally handicapped.

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papanobita
papanobitaLv5papanobita

Thanks. I will not read this novel.

WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4WhiteDragon32

This LN was written before MWM. MWM totally copied this LN in many ways.

Elder_Hill
Elder_HillLv11Elder_Hill

Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.

WhiteDragon32:This LN was written before MWM. MWM totally copied this LN in many ways.
WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4WhiteDragon32

I haven't really noticed any inconsistencies.

Elder_Hill:Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.
Elder_Hill
Elder_HillLv11Elder_Hill

hm ok thx. gonna give it a try

WhiteDragon32:I haven't really noticed any inconsistencies.
bananasuitbrian
bananasuitbrianLv14bananasuitbrian

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Daoist_Hong_Fa
Daoist_Hong_FaLv12Daoist_Hong_Fa

oh wow

Elodin
ElodinLv11Elodin

Haha, what you described is actualy why I love WMW :D

JingleBell
JingleBellLv5JingleBell

Maybe you should read more chapters then make a review I hate someone who read 10 or 20 chapters and make a review. It is more like someone just eat Durian in the first time and make a review about it.

Just_a_person
Just_a_personLv5Just_a_person

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GrandGuardian
GrandGuardianLv5GrandGuardian

This is the original The World of Wizards is the first to be release but Warock Magus World got translted first

FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5FilledWithHope

Yes, it is.

Elder_Hill:Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.
The_Unholy_One
The_Unholy_OneLv13The_Unholy_One

Ur just a snowflake

Aoshi319
Aoshi319Lv5Aoshi319

"might as well be borderline plagiarism of this story," thought i would point out the author of WMW is The Plagiarist lol

Sand_Whale
Sand_WhaleLv11Sand_Whale

I read around 30 chapters and then dropped it exactly because of the points you listed above. It’s good to see That others see this novel in a similar way as i do, and I really can’t understand the higher star rating.

Facu03Dragneel
Facu03DragneelLv5Facu03Dragneel

Thank

SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3SageDaoist4

i just want to ask about the #rape tag mention here.

Quetzalcotal
QuetzalcotalLv4Quetzalcotal

The story feels like dragged out a lot due to MC being stuck in Rank 1 for almost 300 chapters but after that it rushes . By the end of the story he reaches Almost peak Rank . Which is just 300 chapters more .

Aaron_Evelyn_1005
Aaron_Evelyn_1005Lv1Aaron_Evelyn_1005

I haven’t read it yet but I appreciate critics because I get to see the truth of the book before hand, thank you for your input truly; imma still try it out and if it’s really that bad after chapter 30 I’ll come back 🤟🏿

ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4ScionOfDegeneracy

you made me wanna read this.