Quetzalcotal
Lover of Overpowered Neutral characters.
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thank God! it's not one of the common troupe character when everyone else is bad to mc, one talented girl likes him. It makes no sense but here, it is done very well. She likes him for a valid reason and MC seems to know the true nature of her
the first mc that actually wants to go back and knows the value of his parents.
True, I loathe summoning especially fate's summoning where master is weak human and the servants are overpowered nukes.
You are right. But This guy would have ended them then(I mean he's the MC)
Yuji's Dad is MC's Cousin. Yuji is her Nephew. MC's Mom-> MC MC's Uncle(Yuji's Grandpa)->MC's cousin(Yuki's Dad)->MC's Nephew(Yuji Itadori)
Thanks for the review. I was actually hoping someone would point this out. Even I was getting tired to explain but I just had to, as most don't know the power system. Yep, the first Volume is supposed to be the info dump on the power system of JJK. Gege never really explained everything properly, they are glossed over. I had to go to the fandom wiki and write this here. You will also see(read) MC going through all her life till death. So, there's also that reason. Hope you enjoy it if my style is to your liking. đ
The chapters are short. Also, try to use paragraphs. If a paragraph looks too big, try to separate it into small ones. Use Grammarly for spelling mistakes and grammatical mistakes. It makes it better. There are too many mistakes(It's okay, I used to suck a few years back, even now I suck but it is better than my past)
I can understand his rant. The cultivators are so stupid, that it boggles my mind how they managed to exist for so long. MC's survival is explanatory with Fate(Plot armor) but humanity would have been dead with the way cultivators behave.
It's an IRL disease that makes one fearless. Since its discovery only less than 400 cases have been reported. IRL, it also damages one's skin and makes them impaired to fear. They don't feel fear in their life.In my book, I modified it to makes her immune to fear. Nothing else.
He needs to increase the intelligence stat ASAP.
He should have 26 remaining points. Not 9. I think you should correct it.
That's a useless ability. IMO. If the damage increase is at least 50 percent, it would have been with it. But, just 15 percent increase and to lose 6 percent intelligence. Not worth it at all.