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2017-11-17 05:34

This novel had amazing idea and was really enjoyable to read but -many things in story could be done in more chapters -this is clearly unfinished story!! Just shortened to 470 chapters if author wanted we could have even 800 or 900 chapters instead of 470 -terrible rushed ending -some things mainly about world building of was described very briefly especially things concerning eath federation after migration to the twin horse galaxy -not good romance And now some good points -unique story -excellent combination of sci-fi,fantasy and cultivation genres -interesting world building and parts around earth federation where federation was growing from weak to strong (but as I told before these parts were very short unfortenatelly) -good MC -presonally liked heroine probably heroine Ye Weiwei

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