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DepthDweller
DepthDwellerLv157yr
2017-11-29 03:19

Important information for a prospective reader: This book has characters which I grew to love and had amazing potential. That said, in the last 50 chapters of the book, the author ABANDONS the book and is trying to wrap it up as quickly as possible, but then proceeds to give up on EVEN THAT with gross negligence. He even abandoned carefully setup sub-plots that were hinted at forever! Sacrilege!Read the author’s final words: “The story will end here.” (Just before the big boss fight which, in fact, doesn’t even make sense!) “Although there is suspicion of it being a rushed crappy ending, but I don’t want to write about how Han fights the Insect race” (Randomly introduced in the last 25 chapters and are super baddies that you never actually meet and there motivation for destroying the universe is simply that they want to ‘be the best’) “with the dragons.” (Han completely overthrows their ancient, and annoying, culture by insulting them and shooting one of them in the head.) To an author, the ending is always the most brutal part, and I rather not write it and leave the rest of the story to your imaginations.” (You bored coward!) “Until today, whether Han will die or live, it’s no longer important...” (Its important to me!) “whether there is an ending isn’t important anymore, because we have already accompanied each other throughout this journey.” Han’s love life is never straightened out. His background is casually revealed in a monologue. Characters change their personalities last minute. Sub-plots are abandoned..... I don’t want his sympathy words! I want the glorious ending I waited 470 chapters for!

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darkfenix997
darkfenix997Lv4

I'm with you bro 😢

shahriar_shubho
shahriar_shubhoLv6

that's why I dropped this novel after chapter 220 when I knew ending was ****ty and stoped wasting my precious time!

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

This.... Amazing review!

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Hawkkkkkkkkkk
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Arghhh... I don't get how people can rate this story so fucking highly. It's a highly *******ish work but the premise is interesting. But that's the only thing it's got going for it, an interesting premise. Constantly throughout the story, the author keeps repeating things about the MC, about how he's "trained on the verge of life and death and that's why he'll beat the enemy". And when I say constantly it's really no joke. It's been repeated at least 6 times in the 35 chapters I've read. Every time taking up an entire paragraph about how the enemy is so strong willed and I don't know what. The author also keeps rewarding the MC with various benefits, all with the pretext that he worked hard for it and that none his age is as hardworking as him. Stop telling me about the f**king character, stop trying hard to make me cheer for him. Show his actions, show his hard work, show his struggles, make me naturally root for him. But the author obviously can't do that because he doesn't ever let the reader think. He doesn't ever lead the reader draw his/her own conclusions and frankly, it's really boring. Overall the story just lacks effort, and it saddens me because as I said earlier the premise is really fucking good. But that tends to be a trend with web novels and the like. Good ideas, but no writing skills to act on them, resulting in a work that doesn't even qualify as a solid ******* work. There are far better web novels out there that manage to capture both a good story and good writing. So I would recommend that you don't waste your time on this one. It will only serve to aggravate you // Ya sorry my translator dude. Imma have to give you a 1-star rating in quality and stability in protest of Qidian's useless rating system. Also wtf, Qidian legit censors the word "A-M-A-T-E-U-R"

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