READ IF YOU ARE THINKING OF GIVING THIS STORY A READ: WHY: We are all searching for the next fic to scratch that itch on this site. This is it. CHARACTERS: My god this is where this story shines. While most fanfics will brutalise and character assassinate your favourite fandoms characters to fit their story, this one only serves them. Every character acts the way you would expect them. From the Boys characters to the jump chain drifters. And when they interact, they compliment each other. Keeping to their original personalities and values. I love his dynamic with robin. STORY: This story perfectly writes the Boys verse, showing all the vileness of it in original plot points. Loved the way that you wove each of the girls into the story. With them making decisions that was true to their character and not ones that served the MC or the story. Cinder Fall is probably the best example of this. MAIN CHARACTER: I love Law’s personality. He is not compromising with his decisions. Has his own thing going on. Unlike other OC’s, he does not put women or other people first. Very unapologetically himself. And most importantly, not afraid to walk away from women and people close to him. He really does belong in the one piece verse. Love the action as well. Well developed powers that strengthen at a measurable pace. No OP nonsense. CONCLUSION: If you are still reading this, I don’t know what to say. Author keep doing your thing.
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