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Night132Author2mth
2024-12-31 13:10

The summary was getting too long, so I decided to write it here. This is a trial end for me on some things that I havent seen been used here. The appearance of system is very minimum yet you will be reminded of it through plot points. You will found out more about this in the very first chapter. And if you guys dont like the method I used or want to know, ask me and I will answer. For the reviews, I want to put some requirement on you guys. I need real feedback. Critisme, and such for me to improve this story. So, this is the format I want you guys to follow: Things that you liked, found refreshing, want to see more of. Things that you didn't like, you found didn't make sense. Things that I could improve on. If you want to help me get on the list/rankings. Give me a 5 star, with the explanation that you will come back and give me a review in the format I gave. If you have question, dont hesitate to reply to this review. Ill try my best to answer. (Can already see THAT question popping up lol.)

Broken Realities: What-if The Walking Dead

Night132
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DaoistgSFIJU
DaoistgSFIJULv2

It is really well written I like how the author managed to make fanfic not boring . there are a lot of fanfics out there which are system related and by doing so others make Their MC kind of system slave and don't give much attention to the story qual ity. it becomes monotonous . this fanfic however makes things ineteresting . yes, there is system but MC is also not slave of system he can do things at his own pace or way . he doesn't have to complete missions or get points which somewhat deprives mc of freedom and make him grounded and human . it is interesting read . you will not regret reading it .

1mth

Dragaim
DragaimLv4

I like how the author managed to make fanfic not boring . there are a lot of fanfics out there which are system related and by doing so others make Their MC kind of system slave and don't give much attention to the story qual ity. it becomes monotonous . this fanfic however makes things ineteresting . yes, there is system but MC is also not slave of system he can do things at his own pace or way . he doesn't have to complete missions or get points which somewhat deprives mc of freedom and make him grounded and human . it is interesting read . you will not regret reading it .

2mth
Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

it makes more sense to establish the system as a military base for migrations from outside, for example, to collect points to get supplies, to find a shelter by killing walkers, a stash of weapons, a small convoy of soldiers by chance ? if there is a system label, it should have been exploited to the end

2mth
JayChan77
JayChan77Lv1

This is honestly really good as of chp 10. The grammar needs some work in some places. But otherwise, I like where this is going. Tho I recommend altering the summary and title a bit to mention this story is about the walking dead. Maybe it will give your ff some more traction. Good luck author.

2mth
Dark_Zero
Dark_ZeroLv14

the writer has a clean background check, an interesting MC with real personality, I haven't found any misspell or grammar error worth noting either, could use more speed on the updates, but quality better then quantity I guess

2mth
Guaca
GuacaLv4

This is good and well written story so far I like it but if I was Alex I would go out their alone with a mask on calling myself human guy and killing off Zombies we wouldn’t need the Avengers or the JL when we have Alex out their delivery Justice.

2mth
captainfatbelly
captainfatbellyLv4

me beginnings but things have started to pick up this book is going to be really good hope the author doesn't drop it

2mth
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