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Adriana7885
Adriana7885Lv1226d
2024-12-30 02:22

The writing is okay BUT it would be so so much better if there was spaces every few sentences bc it just frustrates me having to read everything like one long paragraph Add spaces please

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DeathSeekerWN
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Thank you for you feedback, but i am lazy bum sadly

Kirito_Kirigaia
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grammarly

DeathSeekerWN:Thank you for you feedback, but i am lazy bum sadly
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