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LastGod
LastGodLv410d
2024-12-27 17:02

Sooo bad. 12 year old ramblings about him being awesome.

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kyler_firstfallen
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Anything more concrete mate? Cause just saying it’s a twelve year olds ramblings don’t really tell me how to improve it’s like having sex by just standing there it doesn’t make sense so shut the fuck up if you got nothing to say write an actual review mate For example: the author could add this into the story cause this or you missed this part of the plot by mistake Tell me don’t just say rubbish and waddle away at least don’t be coming the next day

kyler_firstfallen
kyler_firstfallenAuthor

I’m honestly not trying to be rude or anything I was just disappointed mate I get on the app and I see a review my thoughts were:sweet they reviewed it maybe i could improve? Get feedback? Nope just some one saying rubbish and waddling away like come on and aren’t we all children at heart? So what if it’s rambling weren’t some story’s made by someone’s rambling?

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