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Yassine_El_Ouakili_5545
Yassine_El_Ouakili_5545Lv16d
2024-12-14 05:40

Nice fanfic. Really good. Please add more chapters.

Danmachi: Gacha Draw

AeneasCalyx
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AeneasCalyx
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Hey. Here is a novel I'm translating. Original Name: 综漫：每日一抽 I'll probably (not confirmed) translate multiple novels at once. So wait for news, for now the next novel might be a DxD + ****** world. (If I'll start to do it, not confirmed yet)

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Smikkel_Beer
Smikkel_BeerLv3

Reveal spoiler

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Exticity
ExticityLv4

Nice fanfic just want to ask is this a translated work if so what is it untranslated version name

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Tyler_rigby
Tyler_rigbyLv4

instantly knew it was Gona be a translation when they went on abt lolis's

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Linsar
LinsarLv1

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Arlina2001
Arlina2001Lv1

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Not_Needed_9966
Not_Needed_9966Lv12

I would like to suggest that you find someone who is willing to edit these stories for you, if you don't want to do it. I get it's in the nature of reading direct translations but man is this story rough to read. Not because of the plot or anything like that, but because of the many grammatical issues, the constant use of wrong pronouns, phrases that don't translate well into english, and the general lack of word flow in the story. Sometimes it's not that bad but other times it feels like I'm reading something written by cavemen. Not saying any of this is necessarily your fault since you said yourself that you are just translating it, just wanted to throw a suggestion out there, since you would probably get a lot more readers if the story was somewhat bearable to read.

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Kang_Gabut
Kang_GabutLv4

please give more chapters .

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DaoistQmOtUn
DaoistQmOtUnLv1

Good job on the translation, the story is interesting as well as being the first time I read with kuroinu characters, I hope for more chapters

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