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Damian_Gold
Damian_GoldLv23d
2024-12-12 13:20

if you fix the pronouns(can't even say this without remembering what the delusional ppl say)..............anyway if you stop using he/him when it's a girl or her/she when it's a guy this would get a 5 star review although you don't do it a lot but it happens during the important times where i sometimes get confused Overall it's good.......haven't played the game but i have watched th gameplay so give the ppl some justice

Surviving The Last of Us With My System

elnikinxd
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16 Chs

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elnikinxd
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That's mostly about the translation, I still have a hard time from Spanish to English and when I try it, it censors everything.

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Damian_Gold
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that's okay i'll continue reading after reading many chinese novels my brain eventually starts auto-correcting it

elnikinxd:That's mostly about the translation, I still have a hard time from Spanish to English and when I try it, it censors everything.
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Regardless of whether the fanfic is good or bad I decide to give this story 5 stars, finally someone made a TLOU fanfic, my favorite game series.

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Gostei da novela espero que continue , agora me explica por que diabos é nescessário 140 caracteres para uma avaliação ? Não é como se eu fosse fazer uma analise profunda de 8 capítulos.

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Nice work! Your writing is very good, though there's the occasional mix up of pronouns. Other than that I'd say its great. I hope you keep it up.

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