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Alusec_BR1
Alusec_BR1Lv104mth
2024-12-12 05:54

Keep writing, its really cool to read, the protagonist is good and for now the relationships are really cool and the characters have personalities that make the work dynamic

Surviving The Last of Us

elnikinxd
4.6
17 Chs

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elnikinxd
elnikinxdAuthor

Thank you friend, I appreciate it and I send you lots of love and imaginary money

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

name raw??

elnikinxd:Thank you friend, I appreciate it and I send you lots of love and imaginary money
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Damian_Gold
Damian_GoldLv3

if you fix the pronouns(can't even say this without remembering what the delusional ppl say)..............anyway if you stop using he/him when it's a girl or her/she when it's a guy this would get a 5 star review although you don't do it a lot but it happens during the important times where i sometimes get confused Overall it's good.......haven't played the game but i have watched th gameplay so give the ppl some justice

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NowGoWithTheFlow
NowGoWithTheFlowLv14

Looks like I will stop reading this since you nerf MC system for no reason. Before that book was great. Long chapters, grammar was ok, the story was slow but intriguing.

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Deathkorp
DeathkorpLv4

Damn, I came looking for copper and found gold, damn good series, keep it up champ, I hope for more episodes

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Just_A_Reader24
Just_A_Reader24Lv2

This is a rewrite of the story and to tell you what I think- ITS SO DAMN GOOD 💯 I HOPE THE AUTHOR CAN KEEP COOKING AND LONGER CHAPS PLS ANYWAYS HAPPY NEWYEARRRRR!

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dp5558
dp5558Lv15

It’s alright I kinda liked the old story more this new one is alright too but you know I really came for the system and there ain’t no system anymore so it’s like WTF am I here for. Like there isn’t even a shitty system like damn brah if I wanted to read about a regular mf in the last of us world I would just go play the game.

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Green2ranger
Green2rangerLv2

Reveal spoiler

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Stcorings
StcoringsLv11

Gostei da novela espero que continue , agora me explica por que diabos é nescessário 140 caracteres para uma avaliação ? Não é como se eu fosse fazer uma analise profunda de 8 capítulos.

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MasterReigen
MasterReigenLv4

Nice work! Your writing is very good, though there's the occasional mix up of pronouns. Other than that I'd say its great. I hope you keep it up.

4mth
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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