I agree. Just the first chapter is a bunch of incoherent rambling that cannot be from the perspective of someone of said age. The little bit I managed to decode from it shows that this person does not even know how to ask for a raise. He picked the worst timing for himself, picked the worst method to do so, and didnt even have a new employment offer elsewhere ready to be signed if he didn't get it. Thats stuff you learn in your 20s post graduation or first 3 jobs within any industry. Those who don't learn as much are either too impulsive to learn from their screw ups or ling too much in the moment to research the best approach beforehand based on their country/branche and unlikely to amount to anything. In short. Just that single woe is me, I'm so pitiful, neigh illegible paragraph by itself DESTROYS the entire premise of the character as it is being laid out in the same paragraph, and that is merely the first paragraph. The rest are simularly contradictory.