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jonas_karel
jonas_karelLv44mth
2024-12-11 19:57

I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)

Attack on Titan: The Strongest Newcomer

ZetharQuinn
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Z3kChrome
Z3kChromeLv14

Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.

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MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1

YOU ARE ALL FxUxCxKing IDIOTS THE STORY IS FUNNY TO READ COMEDY GOLD..AUTHOR DO NOT LESSON TO THIS REAL DxIxCxK HEADS..THE MC IS FUNNY AND THE PLOT IS WEIRD BUT NOT BORING OR I WILL NOT HAVE LAUGHED..THE AUTHOR MAKES ALL THE NOVEL FUN READ..THE CHARACTERS ARE FUN, NOT BORING HARDASZS..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT OR LOSE THE FIRE OF LIFE THANK YOU.

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pEmKayS
pEmKaySLv12

Everything is fine. Although sometimes the names are mixed up. Also, is it just me or was there actually a Harem tag here a few days ago? I remember him clearly.

3mth
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj

4mth
Jashm
JashmLv4

messy timeline and mc with a cringey simp golden retriever personality ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

3mth
Narrator_san
Narrator_sanLv3

5 STAR No doubt loved all of your works and thanks for writing an Aot fanfic as there are literally none like I have read many of them they just ditch in middle I really hope you will not drop this

4mth
lightmonarch09
lightmonarch09Lv1

i love this story so far better than most i have read what i loved most about it so far is the main character ryo and krista's slowly becoming lovers and him trying to get a better relationship with the main cast

3mth
Keelyn
KeelynLv4

This is amazing zhshsgshsjsuusjsseue

4mth
earth_19998
earth_19998Lv13

hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998   so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you

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ZAID_THE_GREAT
ZAID_THE_GREATLv4

Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff Good stuff

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