Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.

YOU ARE ALL FxUxCxKing IDIOTS THE STORY IS FUNNY TO READ COMEDY GOLD..AUTHOR DO NOT LESSON TO THIS REAL DxIxCxK HEADS..THE MC IS FUNNY AND THE PLOT IS WEIRD BUT NOT BORING OR I WILL NOT HAVE LAUGHED..THE AUTHOR MAKES ALL THE NOVEL FUN READ..THE CHARACTERS ARE FUN, NOT BORING HARDASZS..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT OR LOSE THE FIRE OF LIFE THANK YOU.

Everything is fine. Although sometimes the names are mixed up. Also, is it just me or was there actually a Harem tag here a few days ago? I remember him clearly.

I give it a low rating only because of the misleading synopsis. Rjrjururugruj3u3urytyru3u3ururururu4i3iririrkrkk3kekeejjejrjrjfugugirurururuturyryyryryry4y4y4yryryryryeyryryurruutjtktktrkrlkkkrkekrjrjrjj

messy timeline and mc with a cringey simp golden retriever personality ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I like the setting of this story and the grammar is good. but the story itself is confusing, chapters repeat themselves in slightly different words. And sometimes they contradict what the last chapter has written. if the story was one cohesive line it would be 3 stars. ( chapters repeat themselves, the system rewards change from chapter to chapter. His interactions are weird, sometimes it feels like they know each other, and the next they introduce themselves to him. and one time they are having a race and half a chapter later it is a duel all of the sudden.) if the author fleshed out the characters a bit more it would be 4 stars (the main character is confusing, and we don't really get a good grip on his character and why he thinks certa in ways. he just does shit at random) and it would be 5 stars if the interactions would be a bit deeper. (like erin and his gang just randomly interact with him like friends, while in the story he has maybe talked to him 2 times.)

i love this story so far better than most i have read what i loved most about it so far is the main character ryo and krista's slowly becoming lovers and him trying to get a better relationship with the main cast

This is amazing zhshsgshsjsuusjsseue

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