The writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
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Hey Kamikaze_Eagle, I appreciate you for your honesty, and to be honest I kinda agree with you. There were plans in the future that will allow the MC to gain all of the skills he had been taught when the students reaches 100% loyalty, but I didn't execute them well as I was stuck between wanting it to be fast pace or slow burn, so I apologise for that. I admit that I overused the agriculture part so from now on I will keep them to a minimum. Most of all, thank you for reading the story even if it's not for you.
Thanks for writing. You genuinely got a talent for it. The character interactions were among the best I've seen from any fanfic I've read. I feel like you just need to tweak and iron out the system aspect as well as avoiding repetition, and you've got a great story in the makings.
exactly.
