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gustavo_hhhhdsdLv14mth
2024-12-03 22:15

I read up to chapter 4 and managed to get an idea of ​​the work, the writing is good and the story is proceeding smoothly so far, there were only a few things that bothered me. 1 - the protagonist is a bit rigid/without emotion at all, I can't connect with him until the moment I am (this is the point that bothered me the most) and 2 - the group chat members are still... .how can I say? They accept that they are part of fictional works, the kazuma may be, but what about the others? They don't even seem to mind, it's nothing that ruined the work, it just bothers them a little.

Genshin impact: I have chat Group

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DUCKINGAROUND
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I read it because of the good reviews. I was deceived.

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Zeth
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I really didn't expect much from this fic, but I ended up being quite surprised. First, I didn't expect the writing quality to be good (due to the amount of chapters posted at once), which by the way is very good. And second, because I thought the fic would be completely generic and boring. It's worth reading if you want a more relaxed fic without too much focus on excessive character development, which I don't think is so bad. It's a good fic for those who are looking for something more to pass the time with the story being very light and relaxed.

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Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

I know it’s early, since I’ve only read 2 chapters, but so far the translation is good. The quality of the story progress and the intro to the group chat and its characters was nice, plus they are all well written. So far so good, I’m happy I got a bunch more left to read))

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via_mai45
via_mai45Lv1

Kazuma and konosuba party appear in this fanfic (approve). Shirou emiya also appear (approve). romance have in this fanfic (approve). adventure to other world (approve).

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wanderer12
wanderer12Lv4

my only opinion is PEAK CINEMA THIS is one of the best genshin fanfiction I read

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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

I haven't read this fic yet. since the synopsis didn't help me, what is the story about? is there romance, harem? [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]

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The_WheelOfFortune
The_WheelOfFortuneLv4

The story is good and all but the characters seem very bland, it gets boring really fast.

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GlN
GlNLv2

It's alright, it's very much an A to B plot. Theres not much character or world building. My main issue with it is that the MC is getting so strong so quickly without reason. There's like 3 or 4 powers he's gotten that wasn't even introduced into the story, like he just randomly bought it from the store one day or something. He got the power of wind from the statue and rarely used it because he somehow got the power of a true dragon and folded Dvalin. He also told everyone about the chat group and I can understand that since they are known as a traveller from another world but the other chat members that are in normal worlds or konosuba just accept it as a fact. The pacing is just really really bad.

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Kudou_taiki
Kudou_taikiLv1

looking for good fanfic finaly found a good fanfic, it's cool. It feels a little weird, but like in a good way, or maybe unique is the word, It feels fresh is what I'm getting at.

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