The only positive thing I can say about the story is, it has good translation. The MC leaves a lot to be desired, as someone who knows the plot he is pretty carefree and childish. He should have been focused on getting stronger and keeping himself safe in such a dangerous situation. Instead he is learning and showcasing flashy light in jutsu that do nothing to keep himself safe in the short term but make him look more suspicious and disloyal.

Boring, nonsensical novel, with script conveniences and an annoying protagonist. Not to say more, I already said enough in the comments of some chapters, I got to 27.

What's the raw name? I've already read this fic somewhere. If you are translating someone's work and earning money from it, at least leave the original source in the synopsis

well... how can I say this? I'm on chapter 27 and I can say that I was enjoying it, there was just one thing bothering me, which is the protagonist's power increasing too quickly for my taste, so I decided to read some chapters at the front of the work, superficially of course (I read between caps 50~70 jumping between chapters) and I can say that the protagonist's power only increases, this wouldn't be a problem if he left Konoha, which is what I thought he would do, since the hiruzen in this work seems be much more afraid of the Uchihas than other stories I've read, but so far nothing, he remains in Konoha following the original work... all that's left is to hope that he leaves Konoha (missing ninja). (this comment is just my humble opinion based on my tastes)

There are a lot of positive things in this story but the MC acts like the arrogant young master which makes this story undesirable, but this is just my opinion you can read this and see if you like it or not

While this is very well written. ALL CHARACTERS ACT WITH CHINESE LOGIC!! Not only that while this is written well the dialog still smells and tastes of non native speakers and comes off stilted and stale. MC is a certified idiot who shows his strength before hiruzen dies getting on both danzo and his watch lists and the novel forgets about the threat of itachi when hiruzen threatens to give sasuke to danzo though not out loud. Not only that but he also takes a shit in the mouth of minato by threating the same to naruto though also not out loud. This konoha is not worth saving and is more imminently dangerous then the original. Yet MC flaunts his abilities openly.

The translation is very good, and the story even better.

Idk what happened but as soon as it hit ch 100 it became Wuxiafied 🥲 I was so confused… ‘mad demon jariah’, random names started popping up, the dialogue felt like it was transforming into a wuxia novel. I’m just waiting for him to start cultivating atp

Excellent fanfic translated with nearly no mistakes! I really appreciate the fast chapter release this translator does, thanks for your hard work and hope you would continue and I'll drop this!

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