Item: Swallowing the starry sky: Wish Fulfilment System
Rating: 5
Author: luci_k

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2024-11-23 15:54

shameless author review. I will post 10+ chapter every day. Hope you like and enjoy this fanfiction. Do comment here as well as that I can continue to improve this fanfiction.

Swallowing the starry sky: Wish Fulfilment System

luci_k

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luci_kAuthor

For all those who are wondering- mc will not rely on system on mid & late stages. System is there only for early stage development.

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Dieznuts69420Lv14

Will it be nonexistent in the future?

luci_k:For all those who are wondering- mc will not rely on system on mid & late stages. System is there only for early stage development.

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Game_B_RollLv4

how many will you batch realese? Meaning for how long will you keep up this rate?

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luci_kAuthor

Yes.

Dieznuts69420:Will it be nonexistent in the future?

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luci_kAuthor

It will be active till 1 month. After that I will update at normal 1 to 3 chapters per day.

Game_B_Roll:how many will you batch realese? Meaning for how long will you keep up this rate?

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Game_B_RollLv4

why did you not just named it Swallowed Star? Why swallowing the starry sky?

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Game_B_RollLv4

Use chatgpt for editing!! They are writng mistakes here. In just the first chapter there were many times i had to re read the paragraph.

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luci_kAuthor

Both are basically the same thing.

Game_B_Roll:why did you not just named it Swallowed Star? Why swallowing the starry sky?

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luci_kAuthor

okay I will re- edit the chapters after genius competition arc.

Game_B_Roll:Use chatgpt for editing!! They are writng mistakes here. In just the first chapter there were many times i had to re read the paragraph.

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Game_B_RollLv4

Has the arc happened? If not how long will it take! I am waiting!!! Everyday i contemplate if i should start reading anyway! But it would suck if after you edit the chapters!!

luci_k:okay I will re- edit the chapters after genius competition arc.

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luci_kAuthor

genius competition arc is completed. I have started re- editing and I will upload it soon

Game_B_Roll:Has the arc happened? If not how long will it take! I am waiting!!! Everyday i contemplate if i should start reading anyway! But it would suck if after you edit the chapters!!

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Mayank_Sharma_7574Lv3

why are you not uploading new chapter's

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Mayank_Sharma_7574Lv3

it's good i like it very much now please upload more chapters of it

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BIGINZOXx9Lv4

another trash i always wonder why is almost all fanfic of swallowed star about luo feng like you we always see mc trying to please luo feng why not just make luo feng the mc i am not trying to say they should be enemy all i am trying to say is that mc should mind his business luo feng do not need a baby sitter if he as you for help and you can do it help if not just rest not your business.

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MrSfiryLv3

An excellent unknown work. Very well written and very engaging (I read it in one day until chapter 129). It's totally worth reading, even if you don't know anything about the original story from which this fan-fic was derived, like I do.

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itis_meewLv4

very good and new fan-fic plot I really like it

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