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Zheren
ZherenLv143mth
2024-12-10 02:17

The writing quality really needs updated. Just a lot grammar mistakes.

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Zheren
ZherenLv14

Still pretty good other than it being hard to read sometimes.

AndyZero
AndyZeroAuthor

Thank you for the review, :]

Zheren:Still pretty good other than it being hard to read sometimes.
RizzDaoist
RizzDaoistLv13

author will he have serious relationship with the women he sleeps with or just a one night stand? oh and most important does it have ntr?

AndyZero:Thank you for the review, :]
AndyZero
AndyZeroAuthor

He would have a serious and clean relationship with the ladies… yes. Although situations will still occur in these relationships. And also… no ntr.

RizzDaoist:author will he have serious relationship with the women he sleeps with or just a one night stand? oh and most important does it have ntr?
Kikuan
KikuanLv12

Agree I just couldn’t take it anymore, also it feel likes I’m reading something a ten year old wrote.

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AndyZero
AndyZeroAuthor

Author Here… So I have decided to give my own review. There is actually nothing much to say, as though my work will speak for me… hehe. Although I am required to say something. Um… where to begin? Oh Yes! This Novel follows the journey of the MC getting all the ladies he wants. "That's it…? Can't you say more about me…? You are my author y'know" Say the MC Sigh' (Author sighs) I actually don't know what to say here. I mean the work will say everything. "For shame…" Says the MC. "…don't worry about my author. He's shameless. However, you can just try out the novel. There are 50k+ free words, so you can hop on now and begin. Yes… now. Go…! Start…! Don't worry forget about the remaining things that are written below they are not relevant anymore. Hehe don't mind me they are…" Look who's being shameless now. "Be quiet author…!" The MC exclaims. Sigh' (Author sighs 😔) ================== Don't mind me Guys. This is all just for show. However you can give the novel a try. If it is something you like, then continue and be ready for more. But if it's not something you like… well, keep reading… hehe, until you find that something. I am sure you would. There will be a lot of smut. Yes lots of it. Although that wouldn't be all. There will also be a detailed plot on the MC's journey of getting all the ladies he wants, and his relationship with them. DETAILED. This is not going to be in the usual way, rather it would be more classic. The story at first doesn't cover a lot, but it is still good, for it is the ground foundation of everything that is to come. Anyways, that will be all for me here. If you have any questions to ask, you can do that right here, or you can leave them in the comment. I will always reply… you. I repeat, ALWAYS. So don't be shy. If there are any more updates I will upload it in an auxiliary. Goodbye for now, see ya in the story… hehe 😂

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