what a weird start..he is 17 and still going to the same class 8 years old kids..at least take him out of the academy and put him in the reserve or something..it looks weird.

Really good story.If only it didn't have so much chinese bullshit. This would be amazing. if it was just written in English style without the chinese influence.

you are a good person brother, updating alot like you owed money from the cartel, i hope you have a safe live and good health so you can always update like this[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

para mim isso já começa uma merda quando o protagonista tem 17 anos e vai querer se envolver com uma de 8 quando eu vi eu não acreditei se fosse pelo menos assim tá ligado ele fosse tipo capitão América fosse congelado o cara de 17 anos foi para a academia ninja e tá fazendo o romance com pessoas de 8 e quando o cara luta o cara ainda perde papo de um guri de 8 7 anos estou com merda isso é uma merda para o chinês que fez isso você come uma carne de cachorro;; e tem uma desinteria pelo amor de Deus

concept is great... but writing quality is a negative 10*

Really good story. I Like this! [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls]

The story premise is good. The mc is interesting. It gives a interesting view of things that happened in the original work. I was enjoying it until about chapter 72 then the quality just dropped like a boulder off a cliff. I don't know if the translator or author had some trouble when uploading it or what. Cause all of a sudden it was like it turned into a chapter from a different story and stopped making sense. The next few chapters were like that so I just walked away from it.

My only complain is about the Chinese-like translation. That's it. Updating Stability, Story Development, Character Design, and World Background are very gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood.

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