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Ruan_Gabriel_8927
Ruan_Gabriel_8927Lv133mth
2024-12-25 07:13

para mim isso já começa uma merda quando o protagonista tem 17 anos e vai querer se envolver com uma de 8 quando eu vi eu não acreditei se fosse pelo menos assim tá ligado ele fosse tipo capitão América fosse congelado o cara de 17 anos foi para a academia ninja e tá fazendo o romance com pessoas de 8 e quando o cara luta o cara ainda perde papo de um guri de 8 7 anos estou com merda isso é uma merda para o chinês que fez isso você come uma carne de cachorro;; e tem uma desinteria pelo amor de Deus

Naruto: sleeping invincible

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173 Chs

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ForeVver
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Usa vírgula filha da put*

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UnenlightenedOne
UnenlightenedOneLv14

what a weird start..he is 17 and still going to the same class 8 years old kids..at least take him out of the academy and put him in the reserve or something..it looks weird.

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LastGod
LastGodLv5

Really good story.If only it didn't have so much chinese bullshit. This would be amazing. if it was just written in English style without the chinese influence.

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by_you
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you are a good person brother, updating alot like you owed money from the cartel, i hope you have a safe live and good health so you can always update like this[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Keith_Cline
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concept is great... but writing quality is a negative 10*

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Tingfei
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Really good story. I Like this! [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls] [img=More pls]

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Mrsmoken2u
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The story premise is good. The mc is interesting. It gives a interesting view of things that happened in the original work. I was enjoying it until about chapter 72 then the quality just dropped like a boulder off a cliff. I don't know if the translator or author had some trouble when uploading it or what. Cause all of a sudden it was like it turned into a chapter from a different story and stopped making sense. The next few chapters were like that so I just walked away from it.

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