I think I saw something similar earlier and was hyped for it but it was deleted like at chapter 12 Hope you can take this further. Now I hope I can see the whole story.

MC is disappointing. He got 10% of sukuna and 20% of gojo at the beginning but he is so weak... As far as I know both gojo and sukuna were born monsters but him?pathetic!! 60+ chapters in and MC still a weakling fucking trash

the story is good but the biggest problem is that it honestly feels like the mc hasn't grown in terms of the temples like he's at 50 on both but he hasn't gotten anything it feels like the mc hasn't changed at all

I just realized I've never written a review even when I've invested so many stones into this story. I just have to say this is one of the best HxH stories I've ever seen and probably will ever see! Hope you don't drop this story any time soon!

The story is mediocre. The most annoying thing is the repeated mention of "blue-eyed, white-haired boy" in every chapter.

Story’s solid, no doubt, but man, it’s the little things that keep it from being great. Like, I don’t mind MC not being insta-OP, that’s fine—but when he’s out here not wearing a blindfold, no glasses, just raw-dogging life while his eyes are makin’ him BLEED? C’mon now. That’s not grit, that’s just dumb. Like, bro, you’re walking around handing out your own weakness for free. And the kicker? MC’s a Gojo fan. He should already know the Six Eyes abilities and drawbacks. So why’s he acting brand new? Makes no damn sense. Feels less like a character flaw and more like the author struggling to keep him from getting too strong. And when you gotta force limitations like that? It shows. Also, I ain’t even gonna go deep into “new body but still allergic to seafood.” Like, did his soul take an allergy suitcase with it? Unless I missed something and it’s still technically his original body, that’s some next-level bullshit. Good story, but it’s the small, dumb details that hold it back. Clean that up, and this could really be a banger.

why don’t you update your “Marvel Multiverse: Family System” novel anymore??? did you drop it or something

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