I see a bunch of these shameless author reviews, and I thought if you can't beat em, join em. Here I am folks. This is my first fanfiction, and I am also very user friendly oriented. So if you have questions regarding things or want to give me advice to make it better I have a high chance of listening. I do hope you can come to enjoy this story as I write it, and that words cannot describe how happy I am to finally push myself to start. Harem or any Romance is still undecided, I mean cmon its Madara, if you can convince me that Madara Uchiha can have a partner and who that could be I will listen. I will also be posting some polls in auxillary for what Mangekyo abilities he should have, since a lot can op or cool. I was originally keeping 1 guarenteed which is Amaterasu, because cmon.. game of thrones, targaryen body, FIRE... I think it suits. but I will listen to the collective public opinion. I will work to post chapters weekly, it could maybe even be up to 9 like today weekly, I mean I only took two days to them. And with college coming to a break, I might go crazy over winter. I hope you are down to follow my journey :D

As the name implies, this story is about a ghost who happens to be an Uchiha. As a good ghost you don't see him, at all, for most of the novel at this point, and when you do, it's a hollow facsimile. It might get better, but it's difficult to wait after what I've read so far.

Why did you start with 8 chapters not about madara? Also the dialogue is very stiff and the description are not very good. Decent try I guess.

great story keep it up, can't wait to see more Madara I hope you will keep updating for a long time [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

initially the story was slow, but trust it, as it gets better and better and i liked the integration of the madara character, it didn't sound too ambiguous and somewhat well portrayed, hoping for more chapters 😁😁😁😁😁

this is poorly thought out book as Chakra is supposed to be a mix of spiritual energy from the soul and physical from the body so it makes no sense that he would not have at least spiritual energy as madara was one of the most powerful in the series

Okay, it's a pretty good story, the plot is pretty slow, but I don't think it's a problem with the fairly fast update speed, 4 days with 14 chapters, which is quite a lot in my opinion.

this fic is gold. can't wait for more. i don't want to spoil it but know that this is a very well written novel that leaves you wanting more.

he has to find a way to survive out of this predicament (you mean they need?)

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