You should probably change the cover photo, it stinks of AI and 90% of readers hate everything AI related. Overall, it's a good story and I really hope his relationship with his father improves.

Honestly didn’t expect this to be so good, I was just looking for some worm fanfics since they’re so rare but goddamn this is good. I def recommend it

As the author of this story I am going to give it the highest review I can give it for obvious reasons. You can disregard at least this review in the long term.

The story is going well and at least I only consider the part where Kaito Kid started talking like some Chinese protagonist, something bad about the story but in general it's going well, there aren't usually many worm fics and even less on these sites and I liked seeing one.

Good book …………………………………………………………………,,,.

Still early days, but so far the novel is really good. It's the same long chapters as the authors other work, and the details and writing style are both very solid. It's a very good take on the Worm universe, with little bits of crossover due to the MCs abilities, but the theme and feel of it all really match Worm well, especially the first few chapters. I feel like the story could benefit a bit of the "random" draws that happen where actually a bit more random, as is they seem suspiciously well designed for what the MC needs, but it's still early. Overall I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.

Right the story is rather long winded. with the plot going slowly but if you are comfortable with sitting down and reading something this is great.