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Cevahir_Gezer
Cevahir_GezerLv13d
2024-11-21 15:13

The most beautiful fanfiction I have ever seen is set in the world of Runnettera. Although there are few examples, writing fanfic on topics that are naturally few is more challenging and requires more literary talent. You are doing well, congratulations, I recommend that you think of the story as a journey, mc, not only in known places and known characters, but also in communication and friendship with unknown 'OCs', let them illuminate some of them with the flame of hope they represent. It would be better if the development of your power were within a certain logic and stability instead of instant power-ups such as plot armor and power-ups. Don't leave the story half-done, write even if it doesn't fit you, publish it and see the good and bad criticisms, but don't act with the wishes and desires of the reader, some want one thing, some want another, there is no end. Be selfish like Gege :) Write without rushing until you finish but regularly, maybe after reading the criticisms and thinking about it yourself, you can say it would be better this way and go back and edit it, I hope you will do great things as you gain experience, I think it is 7.5/10 but I am giving it 5 stars because there is not much written. Nice storyline, nice character design, character development was not complete, the feeling of Mark's character change was not fully conveyed, I think it would have been better if you had handled the feeling of having to fight to the death while being in a modern life one moment, the war desire of the Hamma race and the modern human mentality and fears. Your update speed makes me happy, I enjoy reading the interactions of the main character with the supporting characters and how these interactions affect the supporting characters.

"Transmigrated to Runeterra."

The_GOD_DUCK
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21 Chs

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MagicianMiracle
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so far, it's a great fanfic, but I fear that the author will stop updating in the future or slow his updates, so I shall set my expectations to 0

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Kaitozc7
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Good idea but poorly executed. This novel would be better if the author wrote it more slowly and with more details, to explain more about the characters'thought process. Some plots better not be added, for example that Batman thing in Demacia, that is cringe and not funny(for me and some people in the comments that I see). Anyway, keep on writing and practice, learn from mistakes I hope I will have a chance to read a great novel from you.

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Aecian
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Lol fanfic the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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The_GOD_DUCK
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Omae mo shinderu ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Vengeful_Slave
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It's amazing and I love it. It has good fights,character development and representation. The story development is quite fast paced. And there's very few league of legends fanfiction out there. Absolutely recommended.

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ponysha
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It's already off to a great start, I'm hoping for romance ..................................................................................................

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Ardarock
ArdarockLv13

I understand the author’s decision not to include a harem in their story because of a lack of personal experience in relationships, but I feel this might unnecessarily limit the creative potential of the work. Fiction is, after all, about exploring worlds and experiences that might be far from the author’s own reality. Characters often go through things the author has never experienced—like going to war, killing enemies, or facing extreme challenges. In this case, the main character is already portrayed as someone skilled in deceiving women, which shows that complex relationships are already part of the story. I think the author should focus on what feels right for the narrative, even if it means stepping outside their comfort zone. Making mistakes is part of growth, both in life and in writing. Even the greatest authors have made missteps, but that didn’t stop them from continuing and improving. What matters most is the willingness to try, to take risks, and to tell the story in the way they believe is best. Fiction exists to push boundaries, including the author's own.

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xErNeSI13x
xErNeSI13xLv1

Very good, I hope it continues like this

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LuciTitangenl
LuciTitangenlLv5

It is funny how a scammer thinks he is a normal working citizen. You should have been killed, nothing more. But because an entity of the author's choosing chooses to do this shit he has a chance to do something, aka plot.

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