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Ardarock
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2024-11-24 13:55

I understand the author’s decision not to include a harem in their story because of a lack of personal experience in relationships, but I feel this might unnecessarily limit the creative potential of the work. Fiction is, after all, about exploring worlds and experiences that might be far from the author’s own reality. Characters often go through things the author has never experienced—like going to war, killing enemies, or facing extreme challenges. In this case, the main character is already portrayed as someone skilled in deceiving women, which shows that complex relationships are already part of the story. I think the author should focus on what feels right for the narrative, even if it means stepping outside their comfort zone. Making mistakes is part of growth, both in life and in writing. Even the greatest authors have made missteps, but that didn’t stop them from continuing and improving. What matters most is the willingness to try, to take risks, and to tell the story in the way they believe is best. Fiction exists to push boundaries, including the author's own.

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Space_Fox
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Not having a harem is always better

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Mucho texto, hombre cachondo

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