Well, I believe in the potential of my own story, I believe it will be very good, I will accept constructive criticism, just as I accept praise if you like it, so enjoy reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

So far so good, I'm curious to see how you'll approach the teleportation incident. As I mentioned, build your relationship with your wives, don't make it random, keep it up and it'll be a great story!

For now it's very good, it has a lot of potential, it just depends on knowing how to develop in the right direction. Personally, I really like Eris, so I would like to join the harem.

Ele vai ficar com a Eris??? Ela é perfeita! O A A A A A A A A A A

I will come back when this get more chps

36 chapters and three volumes as of now. So far it been a really great novel with an interesting concept of being reincarnated as a beastman instead of the oh so tipical mc being reicarnated as Rudeus or his older brother. Can't say much for now but the mc is really likeable and so are the OC characters. Hope it continues with this level and i can't wait for mc to meet with canon characters.

I just finished the first volume, very good development, it had its moments of tension and good fights, I hope you continue with this great story

por fin dónde un mc no reencarna como rudeus o como su hermano o como único hijo baron de Paul i senit . y gracias por traer este contenido brother

New review, it's really good, the combat so far is very well written, but I think he can use more of his knowledge in his previous world, as well as make it clearer how people see the MC. Keep it up and it will be a great story.

So far, it's the best Mushoku Tensei Fanfic I've ever read, I was lucky enough to find it at the beginning, and I hope I can follow it to the end and that it has many chapters. Don't give up author, many give up in the middle. Spoiler: Where I am he finally found my favorite character, Ghislaine Dedoldia, and I really hope she becomes a romantic interest, because she suits the MC a lot, I also liked Verdia, you managed to make her seem very unique in her abilities and personality, keep it up!