Well, I believe in the potential of my own story, I believe it will be very good, I will accept constructive criticism, just as I accept praise if you like it, so enjoy reading.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Honestly one of the best Mushoku Tensei ff I have read. The mc doesn’t know anything about MT that is also quite interesting. The mc has potential in both magic and the sword, he seems to have goals further than just meeting the main cast and becoming powerful. There is some slight spelling / grammar issues, but nothing major that would effect the reading experience. Could even go unnoticed sometimes. A lot better than anticipated from me.

This is probably one of the most fire fanfictions I've read. And definitely the best Mushoku Tensei fanfiction I've read. Most fanfiction, in general, follows the main story closely. Either the MC is the original protagonist or someone who eventually becomes close to the original protagonist. But that's not the case in this; the MC of this fanfiction really follows his own story. Some plot points of the original story are still present, but most of it is completely different. Usually, authors don't have enough knowledge of the original story or aren't creative enough to do something like this, but I was impressed with the writing and plot points. It's not perfect all around, but the story stays excellent from the 1st chapter to the more recent ones. I usually drop fanfiction that get this long, so that's really saying something.

Ele vai ficar com a Eris??? Ela é perfeita! O A A A A A A A A A A

For now it's very good, it has a lot of potential, it just depends on knowing how to develop in the right direction. Personally, I really like Eris, so I would like to join the harem.

I will come back when this get more chps

36 chapters and three volumes as of now. So far it been a really great novel with an interesting concept of being reincarnated as a beastman instead of the oh so tipical mc being reicarnated as Rudeus or his older brother. Can't say much for now but the mc is really likeable and so are the OC characters. Hope it continues with this level and i can't wait for mc to meet with canon characters.

So far, it's the best Mushoku Tensei Fanfic I've ever read, I was lucky enough to find it at the beginning, and I hope I can follow it to the end and that it has many chapters. Don't give up author, many give up in the middle. Spoiler: Where I am he finally found my favorite character, Ghislaine Dedoldia, and I really hope she becomes a romantic interest, because she suits the MC a lot, I also liked Verdia, you managed to make her seem very unique in her abilities and personality, keep it up!

I just finished the first volume, very good development, it had its moments of tension and good fights, I hope you continue with this great story

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