first of good job for the story idea and the well written story grammar wise and more. it has a rather new/unique storyline with a system and is well written. now to the negativ points... there are some rather large jumps in the story with glossing over important atory points (dugu bo e.g.) unlikable mc... he is rather simly and a low level doormat. wqy too altruistic and mentally challenged too. unrealisticly slow progress... we have a timeskip of 6 years with nearly no growth... 2 ex level cultivation arts above all else in this world... a rather overpowered system if used correctly( .he doesnt really is the boons dumb right?) and a lot more... and his progress is rather bad.. he has no reals presence too, feels a bit more like a bystandercharacter... add to it the dumb bets yeah... sthat affects the story development too sadly... and there are more systems... which are funnily more overpowered rewardwise for some female leads... which are more dominant etc.... downgrades the development too sadly.. thats my opinion other more simpy people might like it that way. to each their own *shrug*
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