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Dr_Pumpkin
Dr_PumpkinLv31mth
2024-11-20 22:57

The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?

Naruto evolution system

legendaryweeb
3.7
150 Chs

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Dr_Pumpkin
Dr_PumpkinLv3

and also some other characters have Chinese names with one mountain being called liangjie mountain which is unnnecessaryand should be translated and the mc is too stupid for his sake, he called danzo a dog when he could've just be silent so no trouble comes to him? and there's a part where his wooden dragon was portrayed as a god when it was only even at elite jonins strength? overall: good but poorly translated fic

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JustTiredOfPicking
JustTiredOfPickingLv11

I've read this mtl...it becomes a cultivation novel...ninja world even has its own 'heavenly laws/heaven and earth/lightning and wind tribulations' in later chaps XD...

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Dr_Pumpkin
Dr_PumpkinLv3

Ughh, no wonder it's trash they changed the power levels to cultivation 🤢🤮

JustTiredOfPicking:I've read this mtl...it becomes a cultivation novel...ninja world even has its own 'heavenly laws/heaven and earth/lightning and wind tribulations' in later chaps XD...
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Garmaskesi
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Sorry, boring maç and mid story.Sometimes I thought the story would be exciting but it never happened.These are my personal opinions. Good luck with your story.

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Fanglin
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Overall really good novel, can't find many grammar mistakes, it's have really good story and I really like the system it's doesn't have emotion at least not now it's really good keep up the good work author

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boring AF . FIRST FEW CHAPTERS were total waste of time and boring but next chapter were even more boring. it was painful to the ears, dizzying to eye. my mind was blanked out. even p*rn has a good story telling than this. i couldn't get a single impression from MC or system .as a reader i couldn't give a single concern(fk) to his situation. still read close to 20 chapters, it was with my own seer will because I don't want to change the novel and was stuck with it for few hours.

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mawata5622
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I really love this novel it is perfect for me it have what I want from my novel system,weak to strong mc , ruthless but kind mc,ok story keep the good work author.

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Love the system function, loved the beginning, yeah the mc's name needs changing but who cares? It's nothing major. Definitely gonna stick with it to see where the story goes.

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BaDwY_GaMeR
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I liked the system and the character MC Although there are some stupid things he does, it doesn't matter. I give it 4.5 stars, some changes in the plot which I see as stupid but but this is more in nature than staying the same original story despite the presence of MC In it

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Azerath_Gamer
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Полное гавро 50 глав только о том что гг самый слабый и у него постоянно заканчивается чакра. также 50 глав о том что гг постоянно в побеге. в целом фанфик гавно и автор тупой лох.

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