Sorry, boring maç and mid story.Sometimes I thought the story would be exciting but it never happened.These are my personal opinions. Good luck with your story.

boring AF . FIRST FEW CHAPTERS were total waste of time and boring but next chapter were even more boring. it was painful to the ears, dizzying to eye. my mind was blanked out. even p*rn has a good story telling than this. i couldn't get a single impression from MC or system .as a reader i couldn't give a single concern(fk) to his situation. still read close to 20 chapters, it was with my own seer will because I don't want to change the novel and was stuck with it for few hours.

The novel is good with few mistakes,but my only problem is the name,can't you just change the name to a Japanese one? i mean a Chinese name in a Japanese one is uncomfortable if it were a Chinese novel it would be good but in a Japanese such as Naruto?

Overall really good novel, can't find many grammar mistakes, it's have really good story and I really like the system it's doesn't have emotion at least not now it's really good keep up the good work author

Полное гавро 50 глав только о том что гг самый слабый и у него постоянно заканчивается чакра. также 50 глав о том что гг постоянно в побеге. в целом фанфик гавно и автор тупой лох.

I really love this novel it is perfect for me it have what I want from my novel system,weak to strong mc , ruthless but kind mc,ok story keep the good work author.

Great book but MC gets nerfed more times than Naruto can create shadow clones. He doesn't care about the plot but that doesn't mean the author doesn't. Every time he faces someone of significance to the plot, his power either weaken or disappear completely. To make it less obvit that he is getting nerfed, he gets caught off guard more times than someone with at least three maxed out sensory skills should.

Mc always keeps running .There is no development to story really and overall it’s boring

A ortografia é ótima, mas esta é a típica fanfic de 'dragão oculto e tigre agachado'. Entendedores entenderão.

Love the system function, loved the beginning, yeah the mc's name needs changing but who cares? It's nothing major. Definitely gonna stick with it to see where the story goes.