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Knight_NoctisLv43mth
2024-11-13 16:07

Now that I've read all the chapters , i feel like now I can make a review . The Things that i didn't like : The mc itself at the beginning wasn't really mashing well together with the rest of the cast . Felt little bit forced at the beginning. Also if I'm not wrong , this isn't Zoro himself . Someone who was born as Zoro. It seems author tried to emulate Zoro's personality in the story which comes as a little bit off . Zoro in OP isn't really rude or dense . I would describe him as incredible blunt . This felt like mc doesn't have any original personality and it makes it little bit bland . Also , it feels incredibly fast paced The things i liked : Well , it gets immensely better in fighting department , especially the last arc of fighting in the capital . I would like more of it . Moreover, writing also good . I haven't notice any major grammar issues. Suggestions : You can incorporate mc's past , afterall, he's an reincarnated individual . He isn't really zoro. Try to slow the pace down . Add more interactions You're a good author . So keep it up .

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