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2024-12-27 04:08

Congratulations on the translation.... Many flaws in the script, the only thing that catches my attention is the relationship with Gwen, which is actually very weak too, little development of the couple (I hope to find a story with this theme that is really good)... The protagonist has a habit of God thinking he is superior to intervene, it really doesn't make sense, someone from our world with skills, not wanting to save people, or to save what is in his sight, doesn't need to be a hero 24 hours a day, but don't ignore the people in front of him.

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