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lazarus898
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2024-11-03 03:16

As the author of this fanfiction, I try to give my readers the best content but as a novice writer I would appreciate it if you could read my content and let me know what I am doing right and where I am lacking. Hope you guys like what you read.[img=recommend]

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LorDudu
LorDuduLv4

i think i see this before, are you the author of the ancient novel ?

LorDudu
LorDuduLv4

and if i remember you drop, so i hope you don't drop this time

LorDudu:i think i see this before, are you the author of the ancient novel ?
lazarus898
lazarus898Author

Yes actually I had big plans for this fanfiction but just within the first 30 chps readers pointed out many things they didn't like so i decided to keep the outer frame and concept of the fanfic the same while rewriting everything else.

LorDudu:and if i remember you drop, so i hope you don't drop this time
LorDudu
LorDuduLv4

and thanks for no harem

lazarus898:Yes actually I had big plans for this fanfiction but just within the first 30 chps readers pointed out many things they didn't like so i decided to keep the outer frame and concept of the fanfic the same while rewriting everything else.
johnmyth
johnmythLv5

Any romance?

Epic_Gaming_7548
Epic_Gaming_7548Lv1

Bloodbending?

lazarus898
lazarus898Author

Yes but I am not sure if I should use someone who is a known MCU character as his love interest. If you have any suggestions then even better.

johnmyth:Any romance?
lazarus898
lazarus898Author

The direction his powers will be proceeding might eventually lead him to bloodbending but I don't want him to rush into that since it would be too overpowered. I want the mc to be a good balance between powers and how to utilize the people he gathers along his journey

Epic_Gaming_7548:Bloodbending?
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

If you don't want to use someone well known in marval then you can use someone who is well known in real life like Taylor Swift. If you want him to date a normal person in marval (not super hero) then I suggest Michael jones. If you mean a hero who is not well known then I suggest Yelena belova.

lazarus898:Yes but I am not sure if I should use someone who is a known MCU character as his love interest. If you have any suggestions then even better.
johnmyth
johnmythLv5

I think most people prefer a known MCU character. As for suggestions there's always going to be haters and some more than others, but Spiderman girls, x-men girls, wanda, black widow are generally popular picks

lazarus898:Yes but I am not sure if I should use someone who is a known MCU character as his love interest. If you have any suggestions then even better.
lazarus898
lazarus898Author

Wanda is my personal favourite...but won't the age difference become a problem?

johnmyth:I think most people prefer a known MCU character. As for suggestions there's always going to be haters and some more than others, but Spiderman girls, x-men girls, wanda, black widow are generally popular picks
johnmyth
johnmythLv5

I'm not too sure about her age but I think she was 16 in age of ultron which happened after the 1st avengers movie so you can change it or you can wait till they're both adults since most people won't care much after that especially if they have long lifespans and their ages aren't too far apart. Also even if it's not a harem it's normal to date multiple times before he settles down so you can try multiple aspects like normal girls, famous girls, mcu girls, whether it's dating or fooling around. It mostly depends on how you want to portray your character and how much time you want to spend on this aspect of your story

lazarus898:Wanda is my personal favourite...but won't the age difference become a problem?
Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv4

if you are going to use well known characters then I also vote for Wanda. And you can make this Au so that they are not that apart in age.😁

lazarus898:Wanda is my personal favourite...but won't the age difference become a problem?
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