
Although I mostly edit only, I do put time and effort into making it easily readable so i would appreciate the tip, also I'll be taking recomendations if you're interested. patreon.com/user?u=98213065
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I haven't read but the only way physical attacks SHOULD work are; 1. when he isn't elementalized as it is an active ability to my knowledge or 2. when chakra is used in the strike, i could go into more detail about how similar spiritual energy/Yin release is similar to haki but instead i'll go with: energy hit energy, not energy not hit energy, not energy covered in energy hit energy
it keeps getting blocked and banned because it's STOLEN you nuisance, for others check out devil & artefact
tftc quick question, was virus king dropped?
TYFTC is this fic completed or ongoing?
Kurenai's arms gave out and she collapsed face-first into the pillows, muffling her desperate moans. The new angle had his cock hitting her g-spot perfectly. Combined with the way he was roughly kneading her breasts, she knew she wouldn't last long. "Right there! Don't stop!" she cried as another orgasm approached. Her walls fluttered around him as the pleasure built to a crescendo. With a final deep thrust and a sharp pinch to her nipple, she came undone, screaming his name into the pillow. Guts followed shortly after, his cock pulsing as he filled her again. They collapsed in a sweaty, satisfied heap, exchanging lazy kisses as their breathing slowly returned to normal. The sheets were a mess and they'd need a shower, but neither could bring themselves to move just yet… Guts pulled Kurenai next to him, their sweaty bodies pressing together. She laid her head on his arms, her heart pounding from the exertion. He ran his fingers through her hair, tracing gentle circles on her scalp. Kurenai squinted her eyes with a greedy expression as she breathed in the familiar scent, embracing the warmth.
don't pressure yourself too much you dont want to burn yourself out by giving yourself unrealistic goals and make writing miserable
It's almost like people dont want to spend 16 dollars on a shitty translation of an mass produced fanfic
he's supposed to recover 1 life per year so why would it disappear? Is this a retcon or just a mistake?