Very inconsistent and illogical, good concept but needs improvement in writing, story flow, logical sequence etc

I'm impress by the synopsis, it is a lot of words to say almost nothing! PLEASE, WHAT THIS STORY IS ABOUT? The name is Hades and is talk about isekai as a god, is this Hades from greek myth? some anime? There is no tag that tell me what this is a fanfic of. Even the chapters aren't named so I don't have eny clues.

I’m obsessed with this I want chapters it is so hard to find a good Greek mythology fic without it being droppped I do wonder if it is connected to a universe like marvel or dc somewhere else though

writing quality:It's okay.A few mistakes here and there but not much.Its okay, not very imaginative but it's fine. story devlopment:2 stars. To be honest he reincarnated as hades, yes and then became king of gods.In less than 20 chapters.The problem with stories like this is that they don't focus on anything in the mythology they just want to be king of the gods and then when they become that? What next??, Nothing comes next just a bunch of side quests nobody asked for.That is the problem this novel faces.He became king of the gods to early. advice:If you're going to write a story about Greek mythology please write about you being born a new God or something of the sort.Greek mythology has a lot of stories and multiple gods,By you choosing to be born as one of the main 12 gods.You basically destroy 99% of the mythology.No Ares,No Apollo no nothing.I understand you guys hate Zeus and whatever but if your going to tell a good story you're better of writing as a new God who was just born in the world blah blah blah.That way you can have multiple things to talk about and not just make things up as you go, Which is what's happening in this story. Character Design:He's smart and logical and whatever else.Pretty much the basic Mc package since they know the story. world background:What can I even say?Their is nothing to talk about in this story.What world background?!, The author is basically making his story up as he goes.Because again, He pretty much derailed the Greek mythology Canon because of being reincarnated as one of the 12 gods. I personally would say don't read because their isn't a story to tell anymore.He became king of the gods, great?.Now what??? Tf am I gonna read about now?. The problem with these authors is that they always want to stop shit before it happens.Give me a reason to hate Zeus give me a reason to like ur character.Zeus in Greek mythology was awful but he hasn't even started doing anything in this story, you know why? CAUSE U DERAILED THE DAMN Canon from the start??.NOW I gotta watch you make shit up as you go.Like bruhhh I came here to read about a God in Greek mythology not about a God in whatever thing ur brain can come up with next.

I really loved the story until spoiler: Until he suddenly went to compétly different world and Everything he did became unimportant. So

I was fine with everything until chapter 45, the god above all is apparently above chaos and the rest of the trinity gods, and sends mc si hades into a different world where that hades is the one we know from history. His mission now ends up with him being forced to destroy that world to return to his own. It’s such shitty forced plot that I almost want to drop this fic. I’m only reading this because of boredom and the fact this fic was pretty decent, but THAT idea in ch. 45 was such a garbage take. If another shitty forced plot drama happens again I’ll be done with this for good. The crazy thing is that this fic has potential to be great.

Keep up the good work. I love myth fanfics.

the chapter 1 to 34 was good but 35 and the rest yeah it become a disappointment theme become stupid arrogant fuck who power got into his head

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