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Athan1098Lv43d
2024-11-29 15:20

Loving this so much so far, Ana I can’t wait for more❤️

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writing quality:It's okay.A few mistakes here and there but not much.Its okay, not very imaginative but it's fine. story devlopment:2 stars. To be honest he reincarnated as hades, yes and then became king of gods.In less than 20 chapters.The problem with stories like this is that they don't focus on anything in the mythology they just want to be king of the gods and then when they become that? What next??, Nothing comes next just a bunch of side quests nobody asked for.That is the problem this novel faces.He became king of the gods to early. advice:If you're going to write a story about Greek mythology please write about you being born a new God or something of the sort.Greek mythology has a lot of stories and multiple gods,By you choosing to be born as one of the main 12 gods.You basically destroy 99% of the mythology.No Ares,No Apollo no nothing.I understand you guys hate Zeus and whatever but if your going to tell a good story you're better of writing as a new God who was just born in the world blah blah blah.That way you can have multiple things to talk about and not just make things up as you go, Which is what's happening in this story. Character Design:He's smart and logical and whatever else.Pretty much the basic Mc package since they know the story. world background:What can I even say?Their is nothing to talk about in this story.What world background?!, The author is basically making his story up as he goes.Because again, He pretty much derailed the Greek mythology Canon because of being reincarnated as one of the 12 gods. I personally would say don't read because their isn't a story to tell anymore.He became king of the gods, great?.Now what??? Tf am I gonna read about now?. The problem with these authors is that they always want to stop shit before it happens.Give me a reason to hate Zeus give me a reason to like ur character.Zeus in Greek mythology was awful but he hasn't even started doing anything in this story, you know why? CAUSE U DERAILED THE DAMN Canon from the start??.NOW I gotta watch you make shit up as you go.Like bruhhh I came here to read about a God in Greek mythology not about a God in whatever thing ur brain can come up with next.

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