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2024-11-20 00:36

The harem sucks and the personality changes you made to several characters are horrible.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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That is a lot of one-star reviews. Are you just not happy in general or something?

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Daoist730sPkLv1

What problems do you have? Have you read this fanfiction or the ones I gave one star to? I give the stars they deserve and sometimes I also find beautiful fanfictions but on this platform the good fanfictions are slowly disappearing and only these remain which I find quite ugly. If you can't understand it, that's your problem.

Insert_Here:That is a lot of one-star reviews. Are you just not happy in general or something?
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Insert_HereLv13

Yes, I have read it, and it is not as bad as you say, though I agree there are not many good novels here anymore.

Daoist730sPk:What problems do you have? Have you read this fanfiction or the ones I gave one star to? I give the stars they deserve and sometimes I also find beautiful fanfictions but on this platform the good fanfictions are slowly disappearing and only these remain which I find quite ugly. If you can't understand it, that's your problem.
Villain_God
Villain_GodLv13

its bad

Insert_Here:Yes, I have read it, and it is not as bad as you say, though I agree there are not many good novels here anymore.
Villain_God
Villain_GodLv13

mc just force a 11 yo girl to swear on the styx so he could have a harem trash mc

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Insert_HereLv13

Villain_God:its bad
MSSTEG
MSSTEGLv4

It’s the Greek mythos way

Villain_God:mc just force a 11 yo girl to swear on the styx so he could have a harem trash mc
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