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KingPumpkin3
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2024-12-11 10:53

I kinda feel like it is going too fast and a lot of plot that could have been added was ignore or skip it is pretty good you are doing a good job this is just my opion though

Naruto: Fourth Hokage Orochimaru

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AUTHOR YOU BETTER NOT BE DUMB WITH THIS NOVEL AND OROCHIMARU THOSE NOT GOT KAGUYA THE RABBIT GODDESS OR TSUANDE OR MITO UZUMAKI,, OROCHIMARU IS RIMURU put the name together OROCHIMURU..LET'S FACE THIS FACT THIS NOVEL IS HAREM'S NOVEL OROCHIMARU TRAVELS INTO THE MULTIVERSE BECAUSE OF SAGE CIEL'S SKILL THAT WILL OPEN THE DOOR FOR OROCHIMARU HAREM WITH OTHER ANIME AND GAME GIRLS.

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AUTHOR THE TRUTH DO NOT FxUxCxKing QUIT THIS NOVEL because THIS IS A NARUTO-TENSURA STORY DONE RIGHT,, I have read TENSURA Naruto novels and THEY ARE ALL FAILURES.this novel is DONE RIGHT..a story of OROCHIMARU WITH RIMURU SOUL in naruto world-COUNT ME IN..author this novel has potential for multiverse STORY and OROCHIMARU travel with TSUNADE and KAGUYA to other ANIEM WORLD like MUSHOKU TENSEI and grab my favorite beast woman Ghislaine..AUTHOR this is gold

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This may be a bit too early, but here is my feedback 3 chapters in reading (3 chapters were uploaded as of writing this review): 1. writing quality is great, I hope you keep the consistency of writing quality. I can't say much about upload frequency... since there is only 3 chapters uploaded in the past hour. 2. character development, world building and story development is quite good for having only 3 chapter as of now 3. keep up the good work and upload frequently and keep a consistent schedule

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