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2024-11-21 16:42

This may be a bit too early, but here is my feedback 3 chapters in reading (3 chapters were uploaded as of writing this review): 1. writing quality is great, I hope you keep the consistency of writing quality. I can't say much about upload frequency... since there is only 3 chapters uploaded in the past hour. 2. character development, world building and story development is quite good for having only 3 chapter as of now 3. keep up the good work and upload frequently and keep a consistent schedule

Naruto: Fourth Hokage Orochimaru

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